"Troubled Soul"
You stood before me strong and tall
A mountain of love you give your all
You came into my life at a time I was low
And showed me love and the right way to go
All my pain and sorrow I put into your hands
I know no one else has the power but you can
To take my soul and wrap it in your arms
And keep it safe from all lifes harm
Worldly love I can get anywhere
But to save my soul takes a lot of care
The kind I get from only you
The kind I know will always be true
So I stand before you today
And with all my heart I pray
That you will take this troubled soul
And keep it safe as I grow old.
2007-02-27 10:12:18 · 12 answers · asked by ladybug 4 in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
This poem has been copy writed and published.But I'm not giving my real name[sorry] ..Thanks for the kind compliments guys.And it did come from my heart..
2007-02-27 11:27:34 · update #1
ttruytuyf, Weird War et al
Why do you all feel the need to disparage something that comes from a person's heart?
Lady bug, I too think you should have your poem copyrighted and perhaps see about having it set to music.
2007-02-27 10:23:19 · answer #1 · answered by babydoll 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I don't think this is a good site to post it on; you won't get very many serious answers from people who actually like poetry or care, not saying I don't.
2007-02-27 18:18:00 · answer #2 · answered by MunkyZero 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Excellent!
That would be an Great Poem to put to Music.
Ditto.................
Later:
Yeah, you can Down Load the Forms from the Compute!
May GOD be with You, in Jesus Name!
2007-02-27 18:17:32 · answer #3 · answered by maguyver727 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Beautiful! Make sure you get it copyrighted so that someone won't make money off of it.
2007-02-27 18:16:40 · answer #4 · answered by drivn2excelchery 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very nice!
2007-02-27 18:24:26 · answer #5 · answered by Midge 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Well written.
2007-02-27 18:16:52 · answer #6 · answered by REN 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Dreadful.
2007-02-27 18:14:42 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 6⤋
I like it.(clap,clap)
2007-02-27 18:58:01 · answer #8 · answered by jackiedj8952 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think it's pretty good.
2007-02-27 18:16:30 · answer #9 · answered by B"Quotes 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋
ITS VERY BEAUTIFUL, MAZAL TOV!
2007-02-27 18:18:34 · answer #10 · answered by davidhaoman 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋