~*I drank your wine,as you taste mine
I kissed your lips..
you felt my body slip into your soul
I almost cried coze it was so beautiful*~
2007-02-27 03:24:08 · 11 answers · asked by Gõlden angel 4 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
I like it and I also I like you. So I want you to read this: I changed a few words around so I want your opinion. I'm trying to be a poet myself. I am not going to steal your poetry though. I'm just practicing! lol!
I drank you wine, as you taste mine
I kissed your lips, my mind - it slips
You felt my body plunge deep into your soul
I almost cried because I now feel whole.
~wink~ Love Ya! Sweetie!
2007-02-27 03:35:15 · answer #1 · answered by Alyssa™ 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Words can mean so many different things - This is poetry for
those in love who take the time to enjoy each other both physically and mentally. These are the type of people who can make love all day and night and let the beauty of the time become not only their soul but their destiny.
Very few people can feel these responses cause you need a lot of time to give to each other.
Beautiful !
2007-02-27 11:39:11 · answer #2 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Which Hallmark card are you reading this time ?
And by the way that is from the song, Last night by Boys to men.
2007-02-27 12:02:18 · answer #3 · answered by candidworker 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, I recognize it but can't place it. Where do I recognize it from?
As to what I think of it.... like abstract and expressive. Either really deep or it means the two lovers were doing drugs together.
2007-02-27 11:32:24 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Read like some of the love making I have experienced in my life. When its good, you need words like that to explain it on some ethereal level.
2007-02-27 12:10:24 · answer #5 · answered by Dutch 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
how does ones body, slip into ones soul?
2007-02-27 11:27:40 · answer #6 · answered by aphotic nostrum 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
it sounds like Alyssa gave you the answer :)))
2007-02-28 04:48:46 · answer #7 · answered by kalatorul 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds romantic
2007-02-27 11:27:48 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
sounds depressing and sappy.
2007-02-27 11:27:52 · answer #9 · answered by sinkablehail1978 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
mmmmmmmmmmm that sound sexy did you come up whit saying
2007-02-27 11:39:53 · answer #10 · answered by quan6934 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋