As a small child, crawling so tenderly
Not knowing now, what in the future he’ll be
Early in life, we’ll need to plan
To grow him into, a really great man
We hope that his life will be true and be long
For that feat, he’ll need to be strong
For in his life, he’ll share all its sorrows
He’ll take it in stride, and plan for tomorrows
If he is smart, he’ll learn to observe
For sometime in life, it will throw him a curve
If he learns young, there won’t be much pain
As we all know, it can come down like rain
When he is young, he can go anywhere
We’ll start him out young, give him a dare
We’ll hope that, he’ll learn to explore
There is so much out there, for him to adore
And when it is time, for him to grow old
We hope in his life, he was truth full and bold
And when all those years, does takes it toll
We’ll look at his life; we’ve accomplished our goal
2007-02-25 21:48:53 · 8 answers · asked by edgar b 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Family
9 1/2 excellent
2007-02-25 23:19:47 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
9
2007-02-26 05:57:17 · answer #2 · answered by xpsihateyou 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
7-8
2007-02-26 06:02:05 · answer #3 · answered by Wisdom??? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
a 7...I would change some of the lines around or not....it was good.
For in his life, he'll plan for all tomorrows
He'll take it in stride, and share all his sorrows.
( I try to look for all the positive and not over do the sad
any who....I liked it, who am I to change your poem....yikes...
Best wishes
2007-02-26 08:00:31 · answer #4 · answered by travelingirl005 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Eight
2007-02-26 05:57:46 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
grt !!! 10+...
one suggestion : can add more verses covering all stages of his life.. it 'll sound complete then...
2007-02-26 06:15:56 · answer #6 · answered by j 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
eight and a half
can i copy it
2007-02-26 05:55:29 · answer #7 · answered by JKL 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
15 it's great :) !!!!!!!!!
2007-02-26 05:58:34 · answer #8 · answered by zee 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋