After a beautiful night together, we decided to kick it at my place,
Sit back and relax, tonight is all about taking our time and pace,
We start talking, but neither of us is paying attention to what is said,
Even though we're sitting on the couch, you keep staring at my bed,
I look deep in your eyes, trying to figure out what move to make now,
I tell you I know what your thinking, and ask me "oh yeah, how?"
I tell that I saw you staring at my room, and you begin to blush,
Trying to explain yourself, I place my finger on your lips, "hush"
Talking is useless, there's nothing left to say, words have no reason,
The only words I want to hear, is "damn baby why you teasing",
I kiss you slow, my lips sensing every taste they receive from you,
Sucking and pulling on my lips, is something I know you love to do,
The passion I send in each and every move of my lips drives you insane,
Tasting your sweet and soft lips, just like a marshmallow candy cane,
Now begins the touching, hands receiving every inch of your curves,
And I promise that tonight, you'll receive every pleasure you deserve,
I begin to touch your soft breast, but never leave sight of your eyes,
My hands start moving faster now, they almost halfway to your thighs,
But they stop at your waist, only to circle back up to your lips,
You see me, and place my hands right back on upon your hips,
I smile, now looking at the gorgeous body that's lying at my side,
No need to look into your eyes, I know what your feeling inside,
Clothes begin to drop, and we see each other naked for the first time,
I just can't believe that this gorgeous body, tonight will be all mine,
This is where everything will start, but no more details out of me,
Cause if we can't use our imaginations than where would we be,
2007-02-25 17:18:15 · 11 answers · asked by Laz 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
I imagined this,
Your both sitting there as naked as a jaybird.
no movement, no sounds, not a whisper can be heard.
Then she says "let me handle things from here"
as she uses her tongue to caress your ear.
she slowly moves down, from your chest to your thighs
you're layed back, relaxed and things begin to rise.
we all know what happened behind those closed doors,
when she stood up, you saw a dick bigger than yours.
2007-02-25 17:38:03 · answer #1 · answered by dadgonewild 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-10-02 00:13:19 · answer #2 · answered by alt 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
last time somebody asked this type of question I said no. I got a lot of negative feed back for expressing my opinion. so this time I'll say yes. (even though I haven't read it) Great job.
2007-02-25 17:27:03 · answer #3 · answered by Mr. Sir 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Love it. Suprise ending. Too many stories go too far into details. Nice job.
2007-02-25 17:32:48 · answer #4 · answered by mlove1307 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
genius. I say you put some beat and rap to that.
2007-02-25 17:22:45 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
yeah its cute...i know cute seems like a strange adjective but that is how i would describe it :)
2007-02-25 17:28:31 · answer #6 · answered by How Sweet It Is 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
"kick it" made me laugh but it's actually pretty good.
2007-02-25 17:28:55 · answer #7 · answered by All I can be is me 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow! that's beautiful! that is so sweet. that's like really cool.
2007-02-25 17:22:52 · answer #8 · answered by ZariaD 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
yes it very good.
2007-02-25 17:20:46 · answer #9 · answered by i,m here if you need to talk. 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋
it can even be a song....
2007-02-25 17:22:45 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋