please help me?

Question

please help me to draft this. i am only 17.

dear riana,

Thanks again for your mail . please, don’t feel odd that I give you extra pressure. If you feel any problem please don’t hide it to me. I was little bit busy. This is life you know.
Yes, I got your 2 mails and of course the first one. Sorry, I delete that.
Do you know any nice location for photography?
some picture size is too big so, i send it in single mode with every mail.

Thanks
Zian

// please, add more if you want.

Answer 1

Dear Riana,

Thanks again for your mail. Please don't feel odd that I gave you extra pressure. If you feel there is a problem, please let me know. I was busy. I did get your two e-mails along with the first one. Sorry,but I deleted it.

Do you know any nice locations for photography? Some picture sizes are too big so I sent them in single mode with every email.

Thanks,
Zian

Answer 2

First of all you need to use capitalization. Second, you need to construct sentences. Third, go to school. Take English classes and don't fall asleep. You are too old to not know how to read or write. Sorry to be so cruel, but if you want to make anything out of your life you need to improve your writing and reading abilities.


Dear Riana,
Thank you again for your mail. Please send me the first picture as I accidental deleted it. Make sure you put the pictures in thumb size as the others are so big.

Do you know of any other great locations to take pictures?

Thanks,
Zian