its really hard to keep moving on
when you know your stuck in place
and thats why im writing this song
cause i keep seeing your face
what am i gonna do
cause i cant shift the gears
my thoughts still drift of you
after ive dried my tears
i'll put the pedal to the floor
but i know it wont do any good
cause you've shut and locked the door
maybe ive misunderstood
(Chorus)
and now im stuck in second place
i know that i cant win
traviling down the wrong road
friendship is just another dead end
ive run this race so long
i know how its gonna end
with another sad song
and im still just a friend
are you waiting for me to wreck
to get me off your back
maybe i'll break my neck
when my car leaves the track
but i'll keep moving on
do what ever it takes
till the night runs into dawn
even if my body breaks
(Chorus)
im stuck in second place
and i know that i cant win
traviling down the wrong road
whats around the bend?
2007-02-24 15:47:07 · 8 answers · asked by Zach S 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
~Not bad! But I'd change that one line:
Stuck in second "place"?
Should be second "gear"!
2007-02-24 15:51:55 · answer #1 · answered by Kitten2 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You need to get a copy write on this song if you have not already. It is really good.
I would however, change the first line of the chorus. Since the entire song leaves implications of traveling in a car I would change the word to "I'm stuck in second gear".
Just a suggestion. I really think you are on to something. Hurry and get yourself protected from people that would steal this from you.
2007-02-24 15:56:59 · answer #2 · answered by Mee-Maw 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Aww, I really like it. You seem like a very sweet person...I would be the happiest girl if someone wrote a song for me
2007-02-24 15:51:59 · answer #3 · answered by xlivelaughlearn 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice. reading it made me imagine closing a car door then getting stuck down the road.
2007-02-24 15:52:56 · answer #4 · answered by lilac. 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think your song is cool. I could hear someone like Nickelback or Staind singing something like it.
2007-02-24 15:56:45 · answer #5 · answered by mojojoy72 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it
but the best songs out there
aren't very straight forward
that's what makes them so good
because you actually have to think what its about:)
but you're on your way
2007-02-24 15:56:22 · answer #6 · answered by kayllaaaaa 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
dude thats so good. and i'm not just saying that. be careful someone don't copy and paste your song and publish it. lol
write another one!
2007-02-24 15:52:01 · answer #7 · answered by magnolia 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats really good... i write songs too
2007-02-24 15:55:13 · answer #8 · answered by stephanie 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋