I need help eliminating personal pronouns, in this phrase.
"Their, we, us, you, I" All are personal pronouns!
"Life is like a dream, we can only watch the things happening before our eyes but we are unable to change the true course of destiny."
It needs to mean the same thing. Pleez help! Maybe adding words to make it sound more educational and complex. Pleeez, ive asked this before but noone gave me an answer! PLEEEZ Its for a paper. Thanks :)
2007-02-24 08:07:34 · 7 answers · asked by Cavs in '09 ♥ Hurry Back BEN 6 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
"Life is like a dream, one can only watch the things happening before one's eyes but one is unable to change the true course of destiny"
2007-02-24 14:59:16 · answer #1 · answered by Just Me 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Life is like a dream, they can only watch the things happening before the eyes but they are unable to change the true course of destiny.
2007-02-24 17:48:05 · answer #2 · answered by *Chelbi* 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Life is like a dream, one can only watch the things happening before one's eyes but then is unable to change the true course of destiny.
2007-02-24 16:26:07 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Here goes, Life is like a dream, People can only watch things happening ahead but are unable to change the true course of destiny.
2007-02-24 16:28:05 · answer #4 · answered by R.S. 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Life is like a dream, each can only watch the things happening before their eyes but not one is able to change the true course of destiny.
Any help?
2007-02-24 16:17:24 · answer #5 · answered by docholiday 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you can, your eyes, one is unable or they are unable. Or it can,its' eyes,they,. This is hard. Is it real homework.? Life is like a dream, it can only watch the things that happen before its' eyes,It is unable to change the true course of destiny.
2007-02-24 16:15:43 · answer #6 · answered by ruth4526 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Life is like a dream. As the eyes behold what appears to be reality, there seems to be a disconnect with what is seen and the ability to change the course of destiny.
I hope this helps...
2007-02-28 14:06:38 · answer #7 · answered by 12string 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋