I just started rapping, so I just now made a page on myspace. I want to expose my music to people, but not if it is not good. I made my first song and have it on the page. Im the one on the first verse. Please listen to the song and tell me if my rapping is good. Im the one on the song "I Need You." Remember Im on the first verse.
http://www.myspace.com/lyricaloutlawz3rdstryke
Thank you and let me know what you think.
2007-02-24 06:42:20 · 7 answers · asked by Z 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
Im 14 btw...
2007-02-24 06:50:16 · update #1
I am definitely not an expert, but maybe it could be more hard core. I mean the back ground sounds not the lyrics. The current background sounds kind of remind me of a castlevania game, and you could include a break ( some totally different beat or back wards lyrics ) toward the middle of the song. Just to break up the song. But what do I know, It's easy for me to judge. Since I don't have to do anything. Hope this helps you out.
2007-02-24 06:58:44 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Depends... are u the one with the really deep voice, or the one that says, i aint got notin to lose? Also, its a very good song, but you should try to make the chorus faster and make it rhyme some
2007-02-24 14:52:35 · answer #2 · answered by Ash 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you sound like I 20 dude on ludacris label get your own syle then come back with something orginal
2007-02-24 14:51:27 · answer #3 · answered by cashville_con 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It sounds good, but it's kind of hard to hear what your saying.
2007-02-24 14:52:01 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
you do lady killa songs.
bob aint into taht and is biased so bob would not be able to judge.
2007-02-24 20:33:16 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats some pretty good rappin man
2007-02-24 14:53:13 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
yah!!
its good!
but how old are you!
2007-02-24 14:49:41 · answer #7 · answered by i tell it how it is! 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋