Ok this is my first song and Im just going to give you the first verse and I need to know what you like better for the last line - originally I had "Its bolted to your heart" but that sounded kinda weird so the next choices are:
You know its destiny or
Its part of who you are
Have you ever had a dream?
Hidden deep within you?
Have you ever had a dream?
So fictional yet so true?
Have you ever had to listen
To those people that say
It could never happen
But yet you can't let go
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Thank you for your help! Its a song about having a dream/goal but constintently being told its too hard and its not going to happen. The music is sweet and simple. :-)
THANKS 4 READING ALL THIS!!!
2007-02-24 06:02:09 · 8 answers · asked by Cali_forever! 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
It's part of who you are.
You know it's destiny sounds too cliche.
2007-02-24 06:07:09 · answer #1 · answered by Black Rose 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's the part of who you are. Good luck and have fun with your song.
2007-02-24 14:15:34 · answer #2 · answered by Susie B 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's part of who you are - I like it better because it's more internal and something you cannot change, you can alter your destiny.
2007-02-24 14:07:10 · answer #3 · answered by ○•○•Cassie•○•○ 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Part of who you are.
Sums it all up nicely, explains why you can't let go.
2007-02-24 14:10:09 · answer #4 · answered by kiwi 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like its part of who you are.
2007-02-24 14:13:37 · answer #5 · answered by Exotic Pink 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats really good!! (so much more positive than my ones, which makes a nice change! lol)
i think u could probably use both..
good luck (-:
2007-02-24 14:06:09 · answer #6 · answered by mouse 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
NONE, sorry to make u feel bad i didnt even read it anyway because im lazy and its too long
2007-02-24 14:06:23 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
it part of who you are sonds better to me but i aint no musician
2007-02-24 14:05:47 · answer #8 · answered by ox 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋