As i have grown up I have been told to smile, but in a while i've tried to smile, I cry myself to sleep while smiling, even though I am miserable, I stay there lying through my life smiling, even though I am hurting!
2007-02-24 05:03:30 · 12 answers · asked by Katja ie tattybow 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
I tied but failed! but what do you think of it?
2007-02-24 05:11:33 · update #1
Meh, cheer up! Eat some chocolate before you write another poem.
2007-02-24 05:12:31 · answer #1 · answered by Hannah 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think you must be feeling very low and are putting your thoughts down on paper - which does help, so ten out of ten for trying and keep on trying to smile for your self.
2007-02-24 17:47:48 · answer #2 · answered by deep in thought 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm sorry that you feel so sad, but try to look on the bright side, at least you're creative! You shouldn't have to pretend to be happy just to make others feel more comfortable, you have the right to express yourself.
2007-02-24 15:08:08 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Gingerpeachy. You know nothing about anything at all. That guy gives everyone the finger. He is even more immature than you!
Keep smiling Tattybow
2007-02-24 14:05:01 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 2⤋
If this poem makes you feel happier...fine.
But it sounds sad to me.
2007-02-24 13:13:33 · answer #5 · answered by Afi 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Theres nothing happy about that poem.
2007-02-24 13:07:12 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I really like it! It sounds fine!
2007-02-24 13:29:00 · answer #7 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 2⤋
love it, made me laugh
2007-02-24 13:11:04 · answer #8 · answered by tra 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
It is poignant.
2007-02-24 13:15:45 · answer #9 · answered by Yowdy 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
its not happy. its depressing.
2007-02-24 13:10:52 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋