Bird.
A bird is chirping
a perky little tidbit
outside my window.
Over and over.
It’s 3:34 AM
He wasn’t there yesterday.
Remember Proust
Knew nothing about music either.
Why won’t he stop.
Oh why won’t he stop.
God damn it I have to be to work in the morning.
Do they train these goddamn things.
2007-02-24 02:14:56 · 6 answers · asked by J D 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
Made me laugh - I like the way your choppy style mimics the annoying bird!
2007-02-24 06:31:27 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
why won't he stop oh why wont he stop writing poetry that blasphemes God and that stinks in rhyme
God bless the birds and their chirp
bless them for their beautiful music
I was was going blind and my eyes were bandaged after surgery and the only thing that got me through that time was the songs. the musical songs. of the birds.
thank God for the chirps!!!
2007-02-24 02:34:10 · answer #2 · answered by brolee123 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its okay...but u should add a few tweaks here and there to make every other line rythm
2007-02-24 02:23:18 · answer #3 · answered by heroswarrior 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very creative, and nice rhythym.
2007-02-24 02:17:48 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is ok
2007-02-24 02:23:04 · answer #5 · answered by ♥ Nikkee D ♥ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think it is okay!
2007-02-24 02:20:09 · answer #6 · answered by chicago cub's bat bunny 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋