Not the end, just the beginning
When i heard of your sickness
it made me cry. i could feel what
you were feeling i wanted to die.You
wanted to be happy but couldn't not
even when you tried.
I thought i had lost you forever,
i prayed night and day, i asked god to
help you,not to make you stray.I
wondered why this was happening but couldn't understand.
my heart felt weary and my days
grew cold, trying to hold on to you,
that was the first i have ever been bold.
Knowing that god had a plan, i continued
to pray, wishing everything would be ok.
My prayers payed off, because here
you are,living your life the way you did
before, knowing that you have another chance
to live life once more.
Kimone Stachey March
2007-02-24 01:11:28 · 6 answers · asked by kelly 3 in Social Science ➔ Psychology
This poem is about my fiance'. he recently was diagnosed with cancer. but now he's getting better thank god.
2007-02-24 01:32:08 · update #1
SUPERNATUARL! youv shocked me / like WOW! I BELEIVE. your ///// damn i just zoned out thinkn bout this 4 , i dont even know how long maybe about 7 or so..minutes.but soo very deep spiritual path of my thinkn and train of thought . none like it before. it as if (i beleive) u know, watcha call it' has certin intention to have been formed n typed personaly 4 us / me.i donot beleive inquencidence.if by any chance im wrong, it has to have been a miracle of <*no word in my vocab*>a source surged or fused through your one of a kind -justSOinkredible- source or gifted tallent. PLEASE i begg of u to fill in my dought of what iv just told i beleive.Help me it is as im puzzled & shocked , anything. anything at all. anything at all. for u to tell me the inspiration behind/in this , the meaningthrough out all of the amazing passion youv typed . ? .
2007-02-24 01:52:14 · answer #1 · answered by ? 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Wonderful! 10/10 + a star
2007-02-24 09:17:58 · answer #2 · answered by tuxgal3 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Uhmm... I hope this doesn't rude but I myself writes and reads poems and i think that it lacks a bit of symbolism and hidden meanings. it's kind of literal when you read it, no deeper meaning into it... Try using metaphors and symbols, i'm sure it would help heighten the intensity of the poem... It can give more appeal and beauty into it... Just a suggestion... Hope I'd helped ^_^
2007-02-24 09:24:09 · answer #3 · answered by Harakiri 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
that's a pretty poem i think it's about someone losing a loved one and by praying and true love a miracle happened and now their able to live and be together.
2007-02-24 09:16:13 · answer #4 · answered by stefstudy 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Well said. I think it's great that you put your feelings into words for him. I'm sure he will love it. Good luck to you both.
2007-02-24 10:33:12 · answer #5 · answered by vanhammer 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow...its a wonderful poem!!!!!
2007-02-24 09:16:27 · answer #6 · answered by supreety2k 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋