The wind touches my face
I can't feel it I've become too numb
Although you're next to me
The distance between us seems so far
Try to correct myself
All I seem to do is fail
I pick myself up
Here am I am right back at the start
*chorus*
This machine is killing me
It eats away at my soul
It just wants me to die
So I can't feel
It keeps on feeding me
So much that I can't breath
It manipulates me
Doing things I would never do
I disconnect my self
I cut these wires and my mind shuts down
I can still see everything
How come no one can hear my screams
All it wanted from me was to kill
Everything that I have ever loved
*chorus*
2007-02-21 06:33:19 · 8 answers · asked by aphotic nostrum 4 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
ok the lyrics are good and the music is really good, but the vocal track sucks. tommorow i'm going to see if my friend will put it up on myspace only if you promise not to laugh at how bad the singing is. it's not our fault we can't sing and haven't met anyone who can.
2007-02-21 06:40:01 · update #1
Jeff your an idiot i'm responding to your answer at my job in a usda office where i happen to work. this is good you know why 1 out of 7 said they didn't like it. 1 OUT OF 7. i like those odds what about you jeff? and dno't worry i won't quit my job anytime soon. thank you for your input though
2007-02-22 10:29:11 · update #2
oh and my parents are dead ***, wow your a great guy.
2007-02-22 10:30:15 · update #3
Very good. A bit disturbing, but thats not a bad thing. It tells how you feel, but is sufficiently vague to apply to anyone. Very expressive. I like it. Just tell me its not country. j/k.
2007-02-21 06:39:02 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
its really sad and depressing. you seem real good at making up songs tho! i know i could never make up a song. but if you want your song to be a big hit , i would make up a song people can sing along too or maybe even dance too .... those type of songs are more sucessful
2007-02-21 14:40:07 · answer #2 · answered by lily 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Don't quit your day job loser,oh yea you probably don't have one! Sweet get to spend the next 30 years in your parents basement. Ha, you suck!
2007-02-22 17:55:23 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
What's the song
2007-02-21 14:38:54 · answer #4 · answered by Maya G 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good,i think it will be a terrific song
2007-02-21 14:40:46 · answer #5 · answered by Devilish 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
not too bad keep working on it and put it to music.
2007-02-21 14:37:54 · answer #6 · answered by kellyjo 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it.
2007-02-21 14:37:37 · answer #7 · answered by Steph1490 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i love it its so good
2007-02-21 14:37:37 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋