Hold my hand and I'm yours,
And your heart will stay close to mine,
For I know the sun must rise with the dawn,
And at night the stars must shine.
And the wind must wander the ocean
And sing with the waves of the sea;
Just so, I know, I'll be by your side,
And you will be wedded to me.
And you will be wedded to me, my love,
And I will be wedded to you;
For I know the tide must turn with the moon,
And the spring must return ever new.
And the sky must weep that the hillsides
May laugh in the green of their joy;
And the leaves must turn red, brown, and gold
That the earth might their riches employ.
And love like a mad, swollen hunger,
And love like an unending song,
And love like the silent pull of the Earth
Shall be with us all our lives long, my love,
Shall be with us all our lives long.
2007-02-21 06:27:45 · 21 answers · asked by ♥live life to the fullest♥ 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
It's really good...I want summer and flip flops :(
2007-02-21 06:32:57 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Deep, I love writing, but I definetly always love other peopls works more! Awesome job
2007-02-21 06:31:11 · answer #2 · answered by choirboyzryummy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
to me, this is a great poem. i am not a poet, but this seems very excellent. the only word i'd change is swollen...before hunger, because it just doesn't seem like the same language as the rest of the poem. but all in all, i'd say this is fantastic!
2007-02-21 06:30:41 · answer #3 · answered by Christie 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Is it yours?Coz if it is i might study your poem someday(I study English literature in college)perfect poem and very nice 2.
2007-02-21 06:35:26 · answer #4 · answered by Devilish 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its beautiful! it really touched me somewhere deep inside, i need a tissue!!! It made me more happy than when i am sexually active. keep writing, i must see you famous. be somebody, girl. this was outstanding.
2007-02-21 06:31:19 · answer #5 · answered by renthead 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's good, i write very dark stuff though I'm not into this mushy stuff.It's still really good though and you should continue to express your emotions this way.
2007-02-21 06:31:21 · answer #6 · answered by aphotic nostrum 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is terrific! Did you write that? Gosh do you have anymore with you?
2007-02-21 06:31:33 · answer #7 · answered by Kayla 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds more like a schmaltzy song than a poem
2007-02-21 06:30:35 · answer #8 · answered by Clarkie 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋
You need to read Silvia Plath.
2007-02-21 06:30:59 · answer #9 · answered by Superdog 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
girl that was real good i like writeing poems to i like that
2007-02-21 06:33:32 · answer #10 · answered by melton_misty 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋