Help English Grammar?

Question

Help English Grammar, thanks!
Diary
21 January 2007
I felt depressed today because many wrong things doing at school.
First, I went to bed too late for watching television at night,so I lated going to school in the morning and saw the principal,Mr right.He was very angry to punish me.
Secondly,I forgot pack up schoolbooks and homework in my school bag in too much of a hurry.My class teacher nearly dissatisfied with my performances badly and told me doing all homework and revision of books at school this week.
Thirdly,I used mobile phone to send some romantic messages with my girlfriend on lesson.Unluckily,a techer saw my situation.She said the mobile phone was stored by her until my behaviour will be improved better.She might see my dialogues with my girl friend on phone.She would give my phone later.I was disappointing that I will not communicate with her a period of long time.
I was stupid.I'm sure I can improve it and hoping for a better tomorow.

Answer 1

You are actually doing quite well already, so have faith!
In a month or 2 or 10 you will be really good in English.

lessons:
1. I lated is not a word - I was late
2. the principal, Mr right? - Mr Wright I presume, 'Mr. right' is the boyfriend of your dreams
3. He was very angry and so he punished me.
4. I forgot TO pack up school books
5. My class teacher WAS REALLY dissatisfied with my performance (nearly = ALMOST)
6. he told me TO DO all homework and revision at school this week.
7. I used MY mobile phone to send some romantic messages TO my girlfriend DURING A lesson.
8. a teAcher saw my situation.
9. She said the mobile phone WILL BE KEPT By her until my behaviour HAS improved.
10. She might see my dialogues with my girlfriend on phone.
(this too is correct but trust me, she will not read your personal messages)
11. I was disappointED that I will not communicate with her FOR A LONG a period of time.
12. I'm sure I can improve it and AM hoping for a better DAY tomorow.

Answer 2

Help English Grammar, thanks!
Diary
21 January 2007
I felt depressed today because many bad things happened at school.
Firstly, I went to bed too late because I was watching television late at night,so was late going to school in the morning and saw the principal,Mr Right. He was very angry and punished me.
Secondly, I forgot to pack my schoolbooks and homework in my school bag, as I was in too much of a hurry. My class teacher was very dissatisfied with my bad performance and told me to do all my homework and study at school this week.
Thirdly, I used mobile phone to send a few romantic messages to my girlfriend during a lesson.Unluckily, the teacher saw what I was doing. She said the mobile phone would be confiscated until my behaviour improved. She might see my messages to my girl friend on my phone! I was very releived when she gave me my phone back later. I was disappointed that I could not communicate with her a for a long period of time.
I was stupid. I'm sure I can improve at it and I am hoping that tomorrow will be better!



hope this helps

f xxx

Answer 3

I felt depressed today because so many things went wrong at school.

Firstly, I stayed up too late watching television. I overslept and got to school late. I had to go see the principal, Mr. Right, and he was very angry and punished me for coming in late.

Secondly, I packed my school bag in a hurry and forgot my school books and my homework. My teacher is unsatisfied with my performance and told me I would have to do all my homework at school this week.

Thirdly, I was using my mobile phone to send romantic messages to my girlfriend during class. Unfortunately, the teacher saw what I was doing and took my phone until I improve my behavior. I was afraid that she might see my messages on the phone and also disappointed that I won't be able to communicate with my girlfriend for a while.

I sure was stupid, but hopefully I can improve my behavior at school. I am hoping for a better tomorrow.

Answer 4

READ!. read the paper. read magazine articles. read a spelling and grammar book--seriously. (if I can remember correctly, it's called the Enlish and Grammar Primer.) read whatever you can get your hands on and your mind around, for AT LEAST 20 MINUTES A DAY.
ask your local librarian for any book *in proper English* that's about a subject you'd like to read about, that's not too difficult. you can find out by reading a paragraph on the spot and letting the librarian know if it is too difficult or too easy for you. ask for simple and medium books in your range. pick up two or three in each challenge range. that way you are bound to get interested in reading them for pleasure.

*remember, they are on LOAN, so you don't have to pay fines unless you don't turn them in on time, which is very important, so make sure to return them. if you are in the middle of one at the end of the loan period, and are not quite ready to bring it back, call or go to the library, and ask for a renewal.

when you do more reading on a regular basis, the patterns and requirements of the proper English language will make themselves evident. it will impress upon your mind. your mind will be getting the hang of it along the way, while you are having a good time reading.

stick with it even when not in school. you can learn much more than just proper English; you will be gaining knowledge. KNOWLEDGE is POWER. (try reading the Constitution and the Bill of Rights.)

another thing to do, would be to write a paragraph or three on a book you've read. write something about the characters, how they are involved in the plot, the plot itself, and what were your opinions of the book. I'd bet your English teacher wouldn't mind checking over the report, plus you might even get extra credit on your independent report(s).
good luck and happy reading! :-)


ps- I don't think your teacher would go into your phone, but it really depends on the teacher. it is not a good idea to pass texts in class, as it detracts from what you are supposed to be learning. I also suggest leaving it in your pocket on silent during classes.

Answer 5

because of many... not because many.../ last night... not at night../I was late for... not I lated .../Mr. Right. not Mr right/I forgot to pack...not I forgot pack/my bad performances....not my performances badly/messages to my girl......not with my girl/in class not on lesson/the mobile phone should be stored ..... not was stored/I was disappointed not I was disappoiting / for a long time not a long time/and I hope.......not I hoping

Answer 6

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Answer 7

i think you must gonna wokout regarding with your grammar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i will give you an advice to read more on a dictionary.................. hope this will make you improve your grammar

Answer 8

Is this a serious question?

Answer 9

Try to think harder