Pray to him poem, please rate 1 - 10 1 being the worst?

Question

In the wind, I hear bells ringing
Its in tune, with church bells ringing
On the floor, my feet keep tapping
I sing a song, it wakes the napping

I will say this to one and all
There is time, before you fall
For this life that you do live
Just know this, he will forgive

So as you plan your day ahead
And before you dine with wine and bread
Pray to him your sins he'll shed
And in that way, your soul be fed

No one really knows our fate
I say live it right, live it straight
So that in our minds, our battles won
We'll teach these values to our son

So when it is our final day
He'll reach down, we're whisked away
The other side, will say they tried
They never got us, before we died

Answer 1

It's generally not a good idea to ask people to rate your poetry on the internet. There's always a risk that people will be honest with you.

Answer 2

What a vaguely threatening poem. I give it a 3 for spelling and syntax, but it the first two lines didn't need to end with the same two words, especially when "singing" could have been so easily used.

Answer 3

3 or 4. i like paragraph 2 and 3 the most = )

Answer 4

I find poetry very moving.

Unfortunately the only part of my body that is moved is my bowels.

That makes for an obvious rating of #2

Answer 5

If you made this poem on your own, I would gladly give it a 10! Nobody is perfect but at least you tried your best...That is if you are the composer of the poem.

Answer 6

I give you a 10. You are tuned in! GOD bless you today.

Answer 7

in the most part it was good....the last part needs a little work
i give you a..9