rate my song on 10 and please also comment on it.?

Question

BEING ME

do you still remember all those old times we shared.
now a distant memory so long it seems.
do u remember how the story began .
i kept staring at you hoping this hour never ends.
so tell me do you still remember the old times we shared
my heart beating faster just the three words i said.
barely able to talk i asked myself should i go ahead.
so tell me do you still remember the old times we shared
i said i would change i would cross seven seas.
love you till the end till the last breath i could lease.
u said it was not me it was a stranger speaking.
i am sorry for being me for being me my inner most self
everything i said was from my heart and from my soul.
i wanted to change to be with you in body and soul.

Answer 1

This sad sap shizzz!

Just Playing

Wish I could accualy here it... then we would know for sure.

75% of a song is the beat.... note how they don't play acapella over the radio

Answer 2

10/10

Answer 3

i give u 10 out of 10.anything thatr comes straight from the heart deserves the best compiments. keep it up!!

Answer 4

finally she accepted or not?
since ending is missing, i will give u only 5/10.

Answer 5

6/10 its not perfect but has potential a little work and i think it could work out quite well

Answer 6

i give you a 10 out of ten is sweet and romantic i reali think it was sweet. you reali put alot of effort in it and i fink it did you justice as it is a reali nice song.

Answer 7

yes very very good yar
u become a poet really
it made me to remmeber my sweet past
welldon keep it up
try more
rate it as 90%

Answer 8

i give you 9/10 for this as it is something from my heart too... good, keep it up.. feelings on paper