I am not good at writing poems but this is our 1 year anniversary. I need your opinions as to whether it is any good and any suggestions you may have to make it better. Please be honest. Thanks in advance.
One year is not a long time
But I'm just so glad to know you're mine
Seeing you everyday
Makes me happy
So does knowing that your love for me will always be
I know we can't always be near
But my love for you is so strong that your touch I long to feel
And your voice I always long to hear
I know it may not seem as though I always care
But please don't have any worries
For I will always be there
This year has been so great for me
I do think that you would agree
I hope that there are many more
For I need you evermore
And one more thing that I must say
Despite the doubts I have gone through
I jst want you to know that I will always love you
2007-02-17 11:56:20 · 10 answers · asked by usa_grl15 4 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
that is really good.. came from the heart and that's what you should always do!!
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2016-11-23 15:43:28 · answer #2 · answered by maysey 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You said to be honest and I think that is one of the most melodramatic and cheesiest poems I've ever read.
Just go to Hallmark or something.
<3
2007-02-17 12:02:31 · answer #3 · answered by BOO! 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its not the best iv heard bt the fact you made it makes it 100000 times better than any poem they will of ever heard. Very good still. and it sounds heartfelt which is what counts the most :)...
2007-02-17 12:00:10 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
it is a good poem,but only give it to him if he reeeeaaaally loves you.otherwise he might get freaked out
2007-02-17 12:02:01 · answer #5 · answered by Travis T 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that's good! and it comes from the heart too- they will love it!
2007-02-17 12:01:27 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
I think it's ok, but it really doesn't matter he'll love it if he loves you.
2007-02-17 11:59:34 · answer #7 · answered by hey 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
as long as its from your heart!
2007-02-17 12:01:19 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
THATS IS GREAT GO WITH IT!!!!!
I LOVE IT!!!!
2007-02-17 12:01:34 · answer #9 · answered by jess98gum 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it ok
2007-02-17 12:02:40 · answer #10 · answered by techgirl 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋