My luv is too big for me to care about
but its too small for u to think about…
Thou my nights r colorful wit Ur dreams
still my days mourn in ur absence.
Even in a strand of Ur hair, I see my luv
but u glimpse my luv as a strand of hair…
Ur words are octets and Ur silence is my sonnet.
still it portrays only elegiacs
U mean so much & I care dat much
nothing I expect, & am set aback
better I watch u from there
so far yet so near…
Not all gestures of love
strokes of ur lash will do
i’ll be fulfilled
Wen I think of luv, I think of U
both hurt me,
Luv hurts me wit U,
and U hurt me witout luv
2007-02-17 01:59:46 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Nice but sounds like someone broke your heart, and you're in need of someone who loves you and not hurts you.
Cant tell what your emotions were when you wrote this
2007-02-17 02:09:10 · answer #1 · answered by Unique 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is a very good poem, I like it a lot because I can relate to it right now. Did you make it up, or find it? Mind if I copy it onto my myspace?
2007-02-17 02:06:37 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
dats a sweet yet sad poem.. sounds like youve been hurt by sum1.. or u put itup 4 fun of it. nway hpe u ant ben hurt..men r all dogs anyway.lol
althouhg i dint read it all. too long. lol
2007-02-17 02:03:35 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Luv don't hurt if your with the right person.
2007-02-17 02:04:31 · answer #4 · answered by bette69 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
uh nice poem?
2007-02-17 02:02:31 · answer #5 · answered by Alex Garcia 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
AWwww!!! cute but sad poem..
2007-02-17 02:01:42 · answer #6 · answered by Megan :] 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
nice!! sounds like you are feeling it.
2007-02-17 02:05:21 · answer #7 · answered by Jan l 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is a BEAUTIFUL poem!!!!!
2007-02-17 02:05:39 · answer #8 · answered by Nancy M. 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Is this a poem or question......
2007-02-17 02:02:24 · answer #9 · answered by Aisha A 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
good, write more
2007-02-17 02:03:35 · answer #10 · answered by keral 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋