Which sounds better? Or fits better with this poem?
Here is how part of it goes.
I cry when I am loosing, I cry when I win.
I cry when I am good, I cry when I am bad.
but most of all, I cry when I cry for the love that(I) or that(we)had. which sounds better, the I or the we?
2007-02-16 21:27:44 · 12 answers · asked by lost angel 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Quotations
Well, they both sound good, if you do choose we its probably because it takes two people to love each other, but if you choose I you are talking about a love that you had but then you lost because it was what you possibly did that cost you that love, I would go for I because it shows more lonliness and distress.
2007-02-16 23:56:03 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I hope you don't mind but I have other suggestions too (for the sake of rhythm):
I cry when I lose, I cry when I win.
I cry when I'm good, I cry when I'm bad.
Most of all, I cry for the love we had.
2007-02-16 21:35:28 · answer #2 · answered by Nice 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
In that difficulty that's not significant which sounds greater powerful. What concerns is that if it grow to be the affection which you (I) had or if it grow to be the affection that the two considered one of YOU (we) had. that's not meant to alter purely to sound stable, that's meant to be what's actual to the poet.
2016-10-15 12:17:02 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
We had - because when people are in love - it's between 2 people.
2007-02-16 21:29:55 · answer #4 · answered by j b 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
We. I sounds awkward when its talking about love
2007-02-17 00:39:46 · answer #5 · answered by ღ♥ღ latoya 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
They both sound fine, it depends on what shade of meaning you wish to imply.
2007-02-16 21:31:27 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
We...
and in comment to the other answer unless they are in love with themself. LOL
2007-02-16 21:31:51 · answer #7 · answered by dont want stalkers 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If the love was shared, then go with 'we'
But if the love was only one-sided, then go with 'i'
2007-02-17 01:05:13 · answer #8 · answered by trolytes 1 · 2⤊ 0⤋
we had sounds better
2007-02-16 21:31:03 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
"I" sounds better, it is congruent with the previous sentences.
2007-02-17 01:45:06 · answer #10 · answered by ? 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋