aight i know my spelling and grammar aint all that but love is more than that so tell me ur thoughts on my letter what do u think?
U got a man? If not are you looking for one? If so?
can i fill that void? for real im jus sayin what are the chances? look i dont know what type of dude ur into or whateva all im sayin is dat i think ur beautiful and if u give me a chance i will try will all my power heart and soul to give u what u want in a man das if u like men which i hope. i aint perfect in fact far from it i got problems like everybody but i am always willing to work and change. dis is hella corny i cant believe im writin dis shiet but i cant help but try because im tired of feelin regretful so please if theres anything you wanna know about me or if u wanna know me dont be afraid to ask i mean im not askin to be ur man right away nah das not how it works i hope i can be ur friend at first an if the stars are aligned maybe we can take it to another level. i would really love to get ur thoughts on this and would be greatly appreciative to get a reply. i know u probably get alot of letters from other guys but im jus letting u know were i stand and hopefully in the future youll stand next to me? oh by the way my name is watson. thank you!
2007-02-16 04:24:31 · 13 answers · asked by Stolen African 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
DAMN IM SUCH A MACK!!!!
2007-02-16 04:24:51 · update #1
look i know the grammar and spelling aint up to par but damn why yall gotta put so much emphasis on it. im sorry i cant please everyone im just a dude in love. and i still got love for all of yall who think it sucks. peace!
2007-02-16 04:37:25 · update #2
How about if I re-write it... because if I got something like this, I wouldn't be able to understand it...
Do you have a man? If not, are you looking for one? is so...
Can I fill that void? Seriously though, I'm asking what are my chances with you? Look, I don't know exactly what type of man you're into but all I am saying is that I think you are BEAUTIFUL and if you give me this chance I will try in all my power, heart and soul to give you what you want in a man. I may not be perfect; in fact far from it, but they are just problems like everyone else, but I'm willing to try and change. This is corny, I can't believe I'm writing this ****, but I can't help but try because I'm tired of feeling regretful. So please, if there's anything you wanna know about me or if you wanna know me, don't be afraid to ask. I mean I'm not asking to be your man right away, but hopefully in time I can. I would really love to know what your thoughts are on this and would love to get a reply. I know you probably get a lot of letters from others but I'm just letting you know where I stand and hopefully in the future you will standing by me. Oh by the way, the name is Watson. Thanks.
I like writing, so I thought I would re-write, hope you don't mind.
2007-02-16 04:38:09 · answer #1 · answered by Janine 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Please let me help a little with this.
First you need to realize that you are, in essence, selling yourself when you enter into a relationship. Therefore, put your best foot forward. Anotherwards, don't say anything negative about yourself. Take out the part about how you have problems. This is something that can be addressed through the natural course of knowing someone.
I like how you try to compare the stars and the levels you would like to go to though.
I do want to point out to you that grammar and spelling really do make an impression on people. A few mistakes here and there are fine, but I find your letter hard to read as far as the flow goes.
Be succinct and to the point, and add a few periods and commas and it'll express what you feel more thoroughly and have more chances of being read the entire way through.
If you show her that you are taking the time to organize your thoughts and put them down on paper, she'll appreciate it.
2007-02-16 04:36:13 · answer #2 · answered by zencherry67 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
You should definitely start off by introducing yourself first, not putting that in the last sentence. I'm not sure if you know this girl personally, but you should go easier on the first letter. It's fine to let her know that you think she's a beauty, but if you guys don't even know each other it's a little bit much. Start off by sending a friendly "Hi, I think you're a really beautiful girl. Would you mind if I'd wanted to get to know you?" All your answers [from your letter] will be answered in due time. This way she'll feel more comfortable, because there's not as much pressure. Get to know her a little, and as you do, you'll be able to tell her all of these things little by little. I think that'd be a lot more effective.
2007-02-16 04:41:22 · answer #3 · answered by Judy 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If you overlook the gramatical and spelling errors, your letter if very good. It may not be the best love letter, but it's honest as it gets and trust me nothing is more beautiful as honesty. Just send it to her, ver likely you'll get an answer in affirmative. Good luck pal..
2007-02-16 04:30:54 · answer #4 · answered by sha m 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A) It sucks.
B) It sucks.
C) It really sucks.
If you're seriously considering sending that to someone, PLEASE use Spell-Check. Unless the girl has an IQ of 12, she is NOT going to appreciate the grammar AT ALL. If i received something so poorly written, I'd laugh, crumple it, and throw it in the garbage. Or, in the case of email, delete it!
2007-02-16 04:32:46 · answer #5 · answered by SassySours 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I think this letter sounds like something a junior high kid wrote. If you are a junior high kid, then it's an okay letter. I would like it a lot more if the grammar and spelling were correct.
2007-02-16 04:28:39 · answer #6 · answered by Hey you! 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Mack!? This shyt wouldn't appeal to anyone but an ignorant little twerp like you! Worry less about your abilities as a romantic writer and more on your grammar, syntax, orthography and lexicon!
2007-02-16 04:33:46 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Playa'
Honestly...Mackin' is dead! You sound like you are desperate... (Please, don't do that) Be honest. Women love honesty and loyalty more than anything. You can 't be any ones man till you are your own man first. And and that means... Do you have YOUR stuff together??? Can you handle a decent relationship? Are you willing to give just as much as you take? What are your insecurities and are you willing to share them?
2007-02-16 04:38:30 · answer #8 · answered by Ms Kamm 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its alright, its not shakespear, but its nice most guys dont write love letters anymore. Take out the part about it being corny and the part about hoping that she likes men. other than that its good.
2007-02-16 04:29:34 · answer #9 · answered by **baby~doll** 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Damn. Your grammar sucks. I think 40 English teachers just DIED.
2007-02-16 04:28:04 · answer #10 · answered by Belldandy2760 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋