These days go by so fast when I'm not with you
Tears and laughter echo through my mind
Boy my love for you will last a lifetime
Every second goes by you are the only thing thats on my mind
My love for you will last an eternity
I waited so long fo ra boy like you
All I ask is that you will always love me, never leaving me
My heart is yours and always will be
So please don't break it
We've gone through so much but we made it
So just put your hand in mine and don't let go
Don't let me go
Don't let me fall
Keep me in your arms for forever
Look me in the eyes and tell me you love me
Tell me that you care
I've been wating for you to come home
To be with me
Both of us loving each other
Fingers Intertwined with you holding me for the first time
It will be perfect
2007-02-16 02:26:07 · 11 answers · asked by yoshi 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
she says it sucks but i think diffrently what do you think?
2007-02-16 02:26:54 · update #1
Some poems have perfect Rhyme,
and flow with beauty and grace,
these poems take a lot of time,
to write well and put into place.
But those poems don't have meaning,
or emotion entwined within,
If the poem is not believing
it deserves to be thrown in the bin.
The poem your girlfriend tried,
to write from her loving heart,
It was touching and I admit I cried,
Good poetry is an art.
Keep her close and don't let go,
Her heart is tender and full of trust,
she loves you more than you know,
her feelings are not just lust.
We're all happy for the two of you,
and thank you for sharing something so sweet,
now I'm off to find someone too,
who will, like you did with her, sweep me off my feet.
2007-02-16 02:39:35 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Writing a poem isn't the appropriate direction for love, yet once you are going to jot down a poem make it trustworthy. do no longer provide her gentle crap only because of the fact she'll like it. Take it from the middle and she or he'll love you greater for it. and don't difficulty approximately being portrayed as mushy or vulnerable. showing a woman which you're keen to place your self in a susceptible place for her only shows how committed you're to the relationship and how lots value it may carry for you. one greater ingredient. do no longer stress rhymes. It incredibly hurts.
2016-11-23 12:59:42 · answer #2 · answered by puente 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that is a lovely poem.
consider yourself blessed to have a girlfriend like that.
what i don't get is the first line, though.
days go by fast when your'e not w/ her?
doesnt time go too fast when you are doing something fun?
but the rest is very beautiful.
lucky you...
ive never had a boyfriend :(
2007-02-16 02:32:49 · answer #3 · answered by wordsofapoet 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
shes a good poet she shouldn't put her work down it is said to come from ones heart and only being soooo...inspire your girl more on her work she should perk up about it.........i love poetry and study it alot!!!!
2007-02-16 02:31:47 · answer #4 · answered by silenceridge88 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
WOW that was amazing. If you could make me feel like that, call me.lol. jus kiddin. keep each other as long as you can.
peace and one luv.
2007-02-16 05:55:15 · answer #5 · answered by ruth m 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's easy dude.just give her a kiss.she will stop doing things that might let u down
2007-02-16 02:38:33 · answer #6 · answered by mamin_87 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
DUDE IF EVER THERE WUZ AN AWARD FOR A GREAT POEM THIS ONE WOULD DEFINATELY BE A FRONT RUNNER I LIKE IT ITS TOTALLY AWESOME DUDE JUST DO AS THE POEM SAYS AND U WILL BE HAPPY FOR A LONG TIME
2007-02-16 02:30:08 · answer #7 · answered by DI'MARIO 3 · 0⤊ 2⤋
Awww.... How sweet
2007-02-16 02:29:11 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
your girlfriend is so in love with you.. she's sweet!
2007-02-16 02:31:45 · answer #9 · answered by -girlie054- 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think that is adorable:)
shes in love:)
and i think you should be to;)
2007-02-16 02:43:41 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋