Keith I am so happy today
Today is the day that I get to show the whole world
How much you mean to me
How special you really are
You taught me how to love
And showed me how to be strong
I am so excited about our future together
I will to be beside you
Through the good times and the hard times
Whatever arises we will handle it together
I promise to be faithful in mind and body
I devote myself to you alone
For the rest of my life
You are my best friend,
I will always love you
And I will be the best mother I can to our babies
Keith when you put this ring on today
You will be wearing my love
For all the world to see
This is a small piece of me that
Symbolizes our marrage and friendship
Everytime you look at it
Remember I love you
2007-02-14 20:44:29 · 6 answers · asked by britt8smiles 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Weddings
Keith this has got to be
the happiest day of my life
The day you’ll be my husband
the day I’ll be your wife
The day you and I become One
You part of me… me part of you
Today I’m feeling all this joy
I couldn’t feel without you
Today, I know how I can love,
because I know how much I love you
Today, I know how to be strong,
Because I find my strength through you
Today I know I wanna share my life,
My dreams my future with you
Good times, hard times, happy times, sad times,
I’ll be right here beside you
This journey we’ll walk side by side,
Trust me I’m here to guide you
And when you lead this trek through life,
I’ll still be here beside you
Today I stand before them all
Devoting myself to you
My body, my soul, all of my being,
My love I’m giving it all to you
Keith, you mean so much to me,
My world revolves around you
My friend you’ll always be my love
I’ll always confide in you
This ring I give to you today
Promise to keep it with you
A symbol of these marriage vows
These words I read before you
Every time you touch it look at it,
Remember that I love you
This ring here represent a circle,
a bond that joins me to you
Wear it with pride, Let it remind
you of the love I’m always feeling for you
You are my confidant,
my best friend,
and I’ll always be yours.
You are my love,
my life
and I’m forever yours
(Congrats and Good Luck to you both)
2007-02-14 23:33:29 · answer #1 · answered by O S 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I pretty much like them! Sounds like you took traditional vows and put them in your own words, nothing wrong wiht that! I hate it when couples write their own vows but forget to pledge the fundamental things in marriage, and you have managed to do that, the only thing is I would maybe be a little more specific about the hard times you will stick with him through, (the poorer times, the sick times, etc,) and I would change babies to children b/c they won't be babies forever and you still have to keep bein the best mom you can to them! All in all tho, great job and congrats!
2007-02-15 09:39:08 · answer #2 · answered by ASH 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Keith paint your pictures
About how it's gonna be
By now I should know better
Your dreams are never free
But tell me all about our little trailer by the sea
Oh Keith you can always sell any dream to me
2007-02-15 04:51:02 · answer #3 · answered by graphix 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
"You taught me how to love"
"And showed me how to be strong"
You blew open the doors and windows to my soul
and showed me ones I didn't even know I had
I am so excited about our future together
You might think of changing "And I will be the best mother I can to our babies" To I cannot wait to be the mother of your children. It depends on if you want him to cry really
-NmD!
2007-02-15 04:51:56 · answer #4 · answered by NoMaD! 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's perfect. It's straight from your heart.
2007-02-15 08:10:05 · answer #5 · answered by Debra D 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's nice, but you might want to amend "and if and when we have children, I will be...." or "should we have children..."
2007-02-15 08:02:35 · answer #6 · answered by Lydia 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋