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Question

Who has been the most influential person in my life?

I can’t just specifically talk about one person.
As I stepped into new situations, I have confronted new people, and each of them has thought me a new, unique lesson. However, there are always some people in everybody’s life who are the most influential people.
In my life, those people have been my parents. My father, with his great heart, endeavor, honesty, and tolerant; and my mother, with her kindness, morality, and strength as a feminist have become my pattern.
Even though I haven’t roughly gotten what they tried to teach me, over the years, as things have come up in my life, I remember things they thought me that pertain to what I am going through now, and I try to apply it, and it helps me.
I still think that I have got many things to learn from them, and I try my best to do that.

Answer 1

Shania,
What you have written is absolutely Beautiful! I would make just a few alterations in it as such...

The most influential people in my life have been my parents.
We all find that when we step into new situations, we have confronted new people, and each of them has taught us a new, unique lesson. However, the people in my life who have honestly made the biggest difference have been my parents. My father, who has a great heart, endeavor, honesty, and tolerace. My mother Has kindness, morality, and strength as a feminist has become my pattern in life. Even though I haven’t always gotten what they tried to teach me, over the years, as things have come up in my life, I remember things they taught me which pertains to what I am going through, and its application helps me. I still think that I have got many things to learn from them, and I try my best to do that.

You are fabulous. I am glad to hear this about your parents. Have a great evening.
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Answer 2

Who have been the most influential people in my life?

I can’t just mention one person.
As I stepped into new situations, I have encountered new people, and each of them has taught me a new lesson. However there are always some people in everybody’s life who are the most influential people.
In my life, those people have been my parents. My father, with his great heart, spirit of endeavor, honesty, and tolerance; and my mother, with her kindness, morality, and strength as a feminist have become my pattern.
Even though I have only roughly grasped what they tried to teach me, over the years as things have come up in my life I remember things they taught me that pertain to what I am going through now. I try to apply it and it helps me.
I still think that I have many things to learn from them, and I try my best.

watch your spelling. don't use "got" or "gotten". thought and taught are two different words. don't use so many commas. only use one adjective at a time.

GL

Answer 3

the most influential person in everyones' live is the mother figure, whether male or female, biological or not, it's the mother figure(nanny or big sister)...

did you know that if not for the mother figure, you would never learn how to speak and that mean a lot more than you think.

Answer 4

It's time to just pick one.

It's not about being fair, it's about getting your assignment done.

You can later write another essay about the other parent, but get your homework out of the way first.

If you over-think this, you're going to waste too much time. Just get the writing over with.

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Answer 5

God has always been there, behind the scenes, protecting you, waiting for you to come to Him. The moment you do, you'll understand a lot about your life.

Answer 6

How can you ever say that your mother or your father is more important.? They are both there for a reason.What you don't learn from one, you learn from the other.

But you should aways put GOD first.