help me! can I say this?

Question

this is what I'm going to send her

"not sure what to say
today is a fine day
hope I'm not over the line
but I'm glad you a friend of mine
have a splendid v-day ~hugs~"

I want to be more than friends with her....she knows that but we both have issues from the past that we need to resolve and get over it....
she needs to get over a divorce and I need to get over a break up from 5year relation ship

what else can I say in this message to make her aware that i like here more than a friend?

please keep it short so I can fit it in a txt msg
a clever rhyme would be nice

hey, I'm a busy man and i'M out of town all the time
even this week
flower and a gift is to pushy
and we txt each other all the time

Answer 1

She will appreciate you more if you put time and effort into the message and not ask for help on a web site like this.

I'd rather have your words than those of a stranger.

Answer 2

first thing don't send it through a text message boy send her some flowers or a card and some flowers then write a note on the inside by then she will know you like her more than friends. Good Luck!!!

Answer 3

Text Message! Come on Buddy! You'll never be more than a friend! Send flowers and a note!

Answer 4

how cute... i wouldnt send the one you have (to be bluntly honest sorry)

this isnt that much better...

I just wanted to say,
before the end of the day,
that your a truly great friend,
and i hope it will never end.
I love the way you make me feel
is it just me, or is this for real?

good luck

Answer 5

just say her

I will be 4 u forever

Answer 6

Just say what you feel.

Answer 7

sounds too corny.....