2 finalist in a poetry competition are given the word TIMBUKTU to use
1st Finalist: SLOWLY CROSS THE DESERT SAND,
TRECKED A LONELY CARAVAN,
MEN ON CAMELS 2 BY 2
DESTINATION - TIMBUKTU
2nd FINALIST: ME & TIM A HUNTING WENT,
MET 3 WHORES IN A POP UP TENT,
THEY WAS 3 AND WE WAS 2,
SO I BUCKED 1 AND TIMBUKTU!
2007-02-14 00:47:42 · 8 answers · asked by katy23 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Jokes & Riddles
oh ~ yeah, good one! first i didn't get it but afterwards, i was started giggling!
sorry ~ where's Timbuktu? Is it name of a place
2007-02-14 01:33:08 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
5
2007-02-14 01:37:48 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You must be thirteen. Firstly this is a pathetic excuse for a poem... it honestly just sounds like some little preteen acting over dramatic because their parents won't let them out past 12:00 PM. Learn to use metaphor and similes. If you're into poetry that is very to the point and more simplistic try and read the works of Charles Bukowski. Also adding a period to the end of every line [or should I say word] isn't proper; there is more than one type of punctuation. Expose yourself to some real poetry, learn what real pain is, learn the basics of grammar and sentence structure; then give it another go.
2016-05-23 21:56:56 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
d 2nd finalist shud win but dey r both funny
2007-02-14 01:37:00 · answer #4 · answered by jizzro 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
2ed finalist
2007-02-14 02:06:33 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
2nd
2007-02-14 02:43:09 · answer #6 · answered by anna 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i'd definately give it to the second one! very funny
2007-02-14 02:20:01 · answer #7 · answered by JudiM 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it ..sounds good to me..like the rhyme
2007-02-14 01:53:07 · answer #8 · answered by April w 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋