All I want is to be sane
You took everything
without a single care
I use to cry myself
to sleep
Wondering what I did
to deserve this
but as the days went by
I grew cold and numb
lost the ablility to cry
Hate and Pain
spreading through every
vein in my body
Controlling
my every move
my every thought
my every breath
I`m practically dead
just a walking corpse
2007-02-13 08:38:48 · 18 answers · asked by ladythugstar 1 in Health ➔ Mental Health
i think its really good, very deep.
2007-02-13 08:40:55 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
The poem is good.
I'm sorry for you that your life has been so full of pain.
No one deserves a sucky life.
Imagine yourself in a better place. Do it daily. Write a happy poem that says the opposite of the one you submitted. Please do this so you can unstuck yourself from your current frame of mind.
It is very important that you not identify with that poem. Create a new life with new thoughts.
Read: "Ask & it's given" by Jerry & Esther Hicks
Manifest your Destiny by Wayne Dyer
Conversations with God By Neale Walsh
I'm sending you blessings & angels
2007-02-13 16:48:13 · answer #2 · answered by ♣Hey jude♣ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The poem is good but change the subject next time no offense intended
2007-02-13 16:45:35 · answer #3 · answered by hobo 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Excellent. Very moving.
2007-02-13 16:42:01 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes you did a really good job, and hopifully it got out the things that were bothering you, and gave you some relief.
2007-02-13 18:02:09 · answer #5 · answered by Ladyofathousandfaces 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it. I think I'll go cry now. It's sad. Very emotioanl.
2007-02-13 16:46:46 · answer #6 · answered by lola 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Say the Lords prayer and you will come alive like i did! WITH GOD ALL THINGS ARE POSSIBLE, I AM LIVING PROOF :)
2007-02-13 16:56:24 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it. sounds like youve been hurt. Im also a poet
2007-02-13 16:41:38 · answer #8 · answered by Daydreamer 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2007-02-13 16:43:38 · answer #9 · answered by ***** 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
YES . BUT AFTER 70 YEARS ACCORDING TO GOD.
2007-02-13 16:42:23 · answer #10 · answered by Kwadwo B 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yeah, it's nice, and deep.
2007-02-13 16:41:52 · answer #11 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋