Claim your pride.
By: Sandy Holmes.
For the woman in you, to the one who's being hurt. Who's tears are hot...Who's soul is destroyed.
Get up and claim your hurting pride, Don't let that man get away with your life.
Is your sad tears what gives him a smile. He tells you he loves you while he stabbed you in the back. "Sorry" is the word, he is hiddin behind. Everytime you believe his sweet and sour lies, you lookin at excuses to stay and lay back.
Waitin for the day that he finally change... Your youth and your beauty slowly fade away.
You will wake up one day feeling old and tired, full with regrets and drowning in anger.
Thinking of how different your life could have being.If you just had the will and the courage to live. Who said you don't get to have the last laugh? while you walk away and leave him behind. Believe is the truth he will soon realize, that the woman who just left was the one of his life.
2007-02-13 02:05:19 · 10 answers · asked by boricua_2290 5 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
And when he finds himself feeling sad and lonely he will learn the true meaning of the word Sorry.
2007-02-13 02:06:42 · update #1
Your beauty will never fade my dear. It resides within your soul and within your heart. It is true that one who never knows pain never truly knows joy. Sandy -- you keep walking -- Trust can be the hardest thing of all, but when you find it - there you will find love. I will say a prayer. May God bless and keep you.
2007-02-13 02:15:45 · answer #1 · answered by fishergirl 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Aha exactly what I am planning to do to him.....I'm only young and have already had enough of the men from mars!! Grrr
Very good, may need some grammar checking though!
2007-02-13 10:09:39 · answer #2 · answered by ellietricitycat 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very interesting. Had some men troubles or a bad marriage? Great poem though :)
2007-02-13 10:09:08 · answer #3 · answered by tuxgal3 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I know you didn't ask a question, but i wanted to tell you how very good your poem was. You have talent, keep up the good work.
2007-02-13 10:10:05 · answer #4 · answered by pictureshygirl 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Preach girl!
2007-02-13 10:09:01 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
i love that. make s me think completely of my ex and all teh stuff he said to me. thanx
2007-02-13 10:08:33 · answer #6 · answered by smileygirl 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
very powerful... good for you don't stop writing you have a gift!
2007-02-13 10:10:03 · answer #7 · answered by yelenia0 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
gurl that was hott!!!!!!! me and my best friends also write poems
2007-02-13 10:14:51 · answer #8 · answered by mesha 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
have you been thopugh that before?it is very hard.
2007-02-13 10:13:11 · answer #9 · answered by a girl in love 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
lovely......ur talented.
2007-02-13 10:16:06 · answer #10 · answered by cosmos 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋