i know there are many mistakes..can u correct it?

Question

i have to write something about me on blog,if not that will dedcut my marks .can u help me correct any things in the following
This is my first time I write blog, so don’t blame me if I did grammatical or logical mistakes.
First, I will introduce my self I’m (……), I’m 22years old. I live in Milky Way galaxy exactly on planet called earth, accurately on Asia content in (M.country) and in (…) city.
I love studying science and math, so I’m studying engineering.
I hate studying arts or humanities subjects, so I think this subject is going to be tough.
My major goal this semester to wake up every morning but I don’t think so.
Why I chose (…) university?
I got scholarship to study in (…) university, so I don’t care about fees.
I’m very lazy to search for another university, so I’m here.
Because one heart beat faster then one second, so I should go to achieve the rest of my duties.
In the end I would like to thank our lecturer (Mr.) to give us this great opportunity to write blog so that everyone know others and share knowledge with them.
Bye……………………

Answer 1

I might as well start from your second sentence....... If not that will DEDUCT my marks. Can you help me correct ANYTHING in the following?
This is my first time TO write IN THE blog, so don't blame me if I did grammatical or logical mistakes.
First, I will introduce myself. I'm ____, 22 years old. I live in Milky Way Galaxy exactly on planet Earth, accurately on Asian Continent in ...city..., ...country.
My favorite subjects are science and math, so I am taking up engineering. I hate arts and humanities subjects, so I think these are very tough for me.
My major goal this semester is to wake up very early in the morning but I couldn't!
Why I choose ____ University? I got a scholarship in this particular University, so I don't care about tuition fees. I am very lazy to look for another universities that's why I am here.
I happened to have one heart beat faster by one second so I must go on to accomplish my duties and responsibilities as a scholar student.
Lastly, I would like to thank our lecturer, MR. _________ to give us privilege to write in the blog so that everyone knows others and shares knowledge with them.
Bye.

Answer 2

*Firstly*, I would like to introduce myself*.* Im 22 years......I live in *the* Milky Way galaxy, *precisely* on the planet Earth. More accurately in (country) Asia.
I love **science and math, so I'm studying engineering.
I hate studying arts and humanities**, so *those subjects* are going to be tough *for me*.
My major goal this semester is *just to* wake up every morning.But *I'm just kidding*.
Why I chose.......university?
I got *a* scholarship to study *here*, so I......
I'm *too* lazy to seach for another university,so I'm here.
Because one heart beat.....SORRY I DON'T UNDERSTAND THIS SENTENCE...
*Lastly* I would like to that our lecturer(Mr.) *for giving* us this opportunity.....so that everyone *will know everyone else* and share *their* knowledge.
*Thank you*

Answer 3

I hate people like you, not for yourselves, but because your dedication to learning will drive my own country (USA) into the ground. What few people we have like you come mostly from Asia.

It may be too late to remedy that -- I think it is, as our science and math achievement is deplorable -- but, personally, I wish you the best.