The event that changed my life the most isn soccer. I am really committed to it and so is my family. When it comes to soccer, I am very competitive. I started showing my talent in soccer when I was 7 years old, playing in the park with my friend. I beat him, and my talent continued to show. Whenever I have a soccer game, my parents give up their time to bond with me and get to know me better.
The important events that I will always remember in soccer include beating my friend 3-0 and helping my old school's soccer team beat the opposing team 3-1. This got me a trophy for being the best soccer player in 4th grade. To improve my skill, I play soccer with my friends and dad in the park whenever I have the chance.
2007-02-11 08:42:20 · 4 answers · asked by Right here Right now 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Other - Education
The event that changed my life the most (is) soccer. I am really committed to it and so is my family. When it comes to soccer, I am very competitive. I started showing my talent in soccer when I was 7 years old, playing in the park with my friend. I beat him, and my talent continued to show. Whenever I have a soccer game, my parents give up their time to bond with me and get to know me better.
The important events that I will always remember in soccer include beating my friend 3-0 and helping my old school's soccer team beat the opposing team 3-1. This got me a trophy for being the best soccer player in 4th grade. To improve my skill, I play soccer with my friends and dad in the park whenever I have the chance.
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2007-02-11 08:50:23 · answer #1 · answered by Dopple 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
What has most changed my life is soccer. My family and I are really comitted to it, and I am very competitive. My soccer talent began to show when I was 7 years old while I played in the park with my friend. After I beat him, my talent continued to grow. My parents attend my soccer games and it has helped them get to know me better and bond with me.
Beating my friend 3-0 and helping my old school's soccer team win 3-1 are events I will always remember. These events helped me earn a trophy as best soccer player in the 4th grade. To continue developing my skill I play soccer with my dad and my friends in the park whenever I have the chance.
2007-02-11 12:05:59 · answer #2 · answered by mephs2ph 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Soccer has changed my life. When it comes to soccer, I am very competitive. When I was 7 years old, I played soccer in the park with my friend. I beat him, and my talent continued to improve.
I am very committed to the sport, and receive support from my family. Whenever I have a soccer game, my parents come to the game. Through soccer, we have been able to bond, and get to know one another better. To improve my skills, I play soccer with my friends and dad in the park whenever I have the chance.
My important soccer events include beating my friend's team 3-0 and helping my old school's soccer team beat the opposing team 3-1. In this latter game, I earned a trophy for being the best soccer player in 4th grade.
2007-02-11 09:00:21 · answer #3 · answered by gauchogirl 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The event that changed my life the most isn't soccer. I am really committed to it and along with my family. When it comes to soccer, I am very competitive. I started showing my talent for playing manifested when I was 7 years old, playing in the park with my friend. I beat him, and my talent continued excel. Whenever I have a soccer game, my parents give up their time to bond with me and get to know me better.
The important events that I will always remember in soccer include beating my friend 3-0 and helping my old school's soccer team beat the opposing team 3-1. This got me a trophy for being the best soccer player in 4th grade. To improve my skill, I play soccer with my friends and dad in the park whenever I have the chance.
2007-02-11 08:52:14 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋