I shed a tear today
Silently, I felt it fall
You caught it
shared it
held it
felt it
then
suddenly
it wasn't
so big
after all ...
2007-02-10 16:04:38 · 13 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Jokes & Riddles
Wonderful poem!
I am a 9 yr old and a poet too! You can read all my poems on
http://www.poemhunter.com/risha-ahmed
2007-02-10 16:13:06 · answer #1 · answered by risha a 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Get Back To Me When You Start Writting Your Poem
2007-02-11 00:19:53 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Thats a good poem.
2007-02-11 00:18:36 · answer #3 · answered by MJ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that has a lot of sensitivity in it well thought out 9/10
2007-02-11 04:16:59 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was great. It has so much felling and emotion. The words flow so gently it's amazing. You should get it published.
2007-02-11 00:25:17 · answer #5 · answered by Demonic intensions 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very good. Simplistic style and yet so much has been said. I really like it.
2007-02-11 00:08:56 · answer #6 · answered by JJK 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I liked it. I can relate on many different ways.
2007-02-11 00:37:03 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow. thats really good, if you have more poems like that you should like write a book. write on, write on!
2007-02-11 00:12:07 · answer #8 · answered by dancing dani<3 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
simple and to the point but still cute
2007-02-11 00:16:43 · answer #9 · answered by cecelafleur 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good one
2007-02-11 00:19:17 · answer #10 · answered by AvesPro 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋