Tus ojos son como estrellas
tu sonrisa es muy linda
tus labios son hermosos y quiero besarlos
if does not plz post back corrections
much thx : ]
2007-02-10 13:33:08 · 9 answers · asked by The Clash Within 1 in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
It makes a lot of sense.
Just punt an accent in tú
Great job.
2007-02-11 04:23:08 · answer #1 · answered by Martha P 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
The gramatical is correct.
But you can make rimas with the words like
Tus ojos como estrellas brillan,
Tu sonrisa solo me ilumina
Tus labios tan hermosos me Facinan
2007-02-10 16:26:56 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
It sounds right to me and I understand it
Now, let's turn it to the experts . . . XD
2007-02-10 13:45:35 · answer #3 · answered by Quiero verla como prostituta 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
WOW!!! It sounds great!!! She will fall your you!!!
Happy Valentine!!!
2007-02-10 15:39:11 · answer #4 · answered by PRLadyDama 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It doesn't have any mistakes, you did a great job ;)
2007-02-10 13:45:49 · answer #5 · answered by chris_keever2000 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its great who is it for
2007-02-10 14:20:56 · answer #6 · answered by la naca 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it makes absolute sense to me.
2007-02-11 13:17:09 · answer #7 · answered by bluehornedmoon 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
it does... and by the way it is really sweet/cute, great job!!! :)
2007-02-10 14:36:16 · answer #8 · answered by cool_like 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yeah, it makes sense.
2007-02-10 14:14:24 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋