Please help me on any changes or anything that I need to do.
I know I messed up.
but there is no other way that i can find out. please help.
Imbibe eager cheetah
the sunset has rised
hurry up and get your water
before the elephants give you a surprise
2007-02-10 06:26:33 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Jokes & Riddles
thank u! everyone who answered the 3rd person i think was the one who helped me the most cuz now it makes sense! lol thank u!
thanks everyone!
now i nee dhelp on my toher poem :(
2007-02-10 06:39:03 · update #1
thank u! everyone who answered the 3rd person i think was the one who helped me the most cuz now it makes sense! lol thank u!
thanks everyone!
now i nee dhelp on my toher poem :(
2007-02-10 06:39:04 · update #2
put "will rise" instead of "has rised"...then it will make sense in English and be correct.
2007-02-10 06:31:38 · answer #1 · answered by samantha 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If you need to change anything specific, it would be punctuation and the words "rised" to "risen" and "sunset" to "sun." Like this...
Imbibe eager cheetah;
the sun has risen.
Hurry up and get your water
before the elephants give you a surprise.
Good luck!
2007-02-10 06:35:03 · answer #2 · answered by Laurel_Eden 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
confusion is a part of life.
2007-02-10 06:30:21 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
if the sun is setting, rising, it cannot be.
2007-02-10 06:29:52 · answer #4 · answered by Motherload 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wat does imbibe mean? and that's a little bit first graderish
only being a hard critisist because it helps u âº
2007-02-10 06:29:39 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋