Need help what do u think about this poem?

Question

----Stolen emotion---

What have you ruined?
Dark Black shadowy cloud of sickness
as thoughts scream.
we once tasted bliss
so innocent and sweet
your love faded
dark vision of agony-
drops of blood, fowllow rain follow pain
love torn apart in a strom of hate
I HATE YOU!

what did you think about this poem?
do you think it is good?
what is this poem tellin you?

if theres any errors plz let me know.

Thank u

Answer 1

i like the poem and i'm not really into poetry....and that says a lot. it's well written and shows emotion...anger, bitterness, hatred. although i do like the poem, i don't think that it's up to the general public if the poem is "good" or not. it is up to you (for i believe that you wrote it) if the poem is good. if you like it, you put effort into it and that it states what you want to say, than it's a good poem no matter what others think!

Answer 2

What have you ruined?

Dark shadowy clouds of sickness,
As my thoughts scream.
We once tasted bliss,
So innocent and sweet.

Your love has faded,
Showing dark visions of agony.
Drops of blood trickling,
Followed by rain and pain.

A love so torn apart,
In a storm of hate.
My heart screaming out,
I HATE YOU!
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This poem shows bitterness and hatred.

Answer 3

The poem tells me there is very deep emotions, turmoils, sadness, bitterness. and yet there is almost a "better to have loved and lost - than to have never loved at all".

Answer 4

if its for school i woldnt turn anything in about drops of blodd trickling. its self incriminating and people like to send kids to the school psychologist alot these days

Answer 5

Sorry, don't want to hurt your feelings but I think it's dreadful.

Answer 6

i like it....tells me you hate a bad relationship...