~*The red rose whispers of passion,
And the white rose breathes of love;
O, the red rose is a falcon,
And the white rose is a dove*~
2007-02-10 01:24:55 · 18 answers · asked by Gõlden angel 4 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
I like it alot. You seem like a wonderful person.
2007-02-10 01:27:36 · answer #1 · answered by Alyssa™ 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
7
2007-02-10 09:28:56 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
7
2007-02-10 09:27:43 · answer #3 · answered by Java Queen 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Inside a boat embraced with passion
I was last night with my true love.
Above us fled a seasick falcon
We only wished it was a dove.
You love roses, I love the sea!
I liked your poem.
2007-02-10 09:33:13 · answer #4 · answered by Alice in Wonderbra 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
1 out of 10, I would give it a negative 5
2007-02-10 09:27:39 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
on a scale from 1-10, i'd give it a 8. It's a nice piece of writing, good job.
2007-02-10 09:33:20 · answer #6 · answered by Drea 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hmm didn't made much sense to me since I am zero when it comes to love but it came from you I will rate it 10 out of 10
2007-02-10 09:37:16 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
That is actually a very good poem.
Did you write that? I really like it. But you shouldn't care what other peopel think of your poems.
You should write for you...not anybody else.
2007-02-10 09:27:47 · answer #8 · answered by ¡Free Love! 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
well... it's pointless. It feels like the ending and the middle were cut off. elaborate it, continue it, complete it.
2007-02-10 09:28:07 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
John O'Reilly was a pretty good poet.
2007-02-10 09:32:34 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋