i saw this post and it was good this is one poem. just not negative
when i was down you were by my side
could not get home you offered me a ride
when i left the state you called everyday
i was so flattered didnt know what to say
when i came back i brought you a gift
and from that day on our relationship would shift
we would talk on the phone every once in a while
and when i would look you would give me a smile
holdin hands watchin movies and all
asking you 2 the school winter ball
spend summer nights lookin up at the stars
wonderin how our relationship got far.....
2007-02-09 18:06:10 · 4 answers · asked by aznboi2go 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Smooth out some of the phrasing and set it to music. Country music could be a match. Don't forget to copyright it.
2007-02-09 20:54:01 · answer #1 · answered by gatcllc 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Time is what you ought to provide him. Take a deep breath, and skim your possess phrases with an open brain. You have learned how helpful existence is, so take your recognition and maintain dwelling. And realize that if you're intended to be, he's going to forgive you and also you each can transfer on. Just step again and provide it a couple of weeks, then process him as a pal, see in which it is going from there.
2016-09-07 00:10:53 · answer #2 · answered by gombos 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
OK, good memory--time to get on with life. Don't forget why you dumped him. Don't get mushy on me now.
2007-02-09 18:12:18 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
very nice.I love poems.hope ur still writing.
2007-02-09 18:13:39 · answer #4 · answered by noname 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋