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there was, however, white fog. He showed me to the chair and required me to sit down. “Who are you”, I asked him. “I am God and I come to you. I believe you plead for help, didn’t you? Truly, I confessed my wishes for how I want to live in this earthly world. Then he pulled out from something like a remote. Okay I put you in a time machine and I want you to imagine whether your dream of living in. All you need to do is to press forward or rewind to fit your lifestyle. But somehow, you sometimes cannot change what happened in past but you can change presently that influence your future. Nothing makes sense to me. Before I move my hands to
say something, he vanished rapidly. I felt overwhelming with the instructions but I did press forward and I figured that I would turn into as a queen of United States. I realized being a queen does not only pose for her beauty but she have a lot of duties to rule the home county. I jeered at for my part, by the way, and then I press

Answer 1

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