Yo me llamo Sarah. Soy mediana con pelo Rubia/Blonda obscura y ojos azules. Soy inteligente, comica, y trabajadora. Me gusta leer, bailar, y cantar. Mi color favorito es morado.
(Of course it's not me I'm talking about)
2007-02-08 13:34:15 · 5 answers · asked by al5645al 2 in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
(yo=is not necessary) Me llamo Sarah. (Soy mediana, DE pelo rubio oscuro/obscuro BOTH ARE 0K=soy rubia oscura/obscura)...y de ojos azules. Soy inteligente, cómica y trabajadora. Me gusta leer, bailar y cantar. Mi color favorito es el morado.
2007-02-08 13:48:13 · answer #1 · answered by placer y goce 3 · 0⤊ 2⤋
Me llamo Sarah. Soy mediana, DE pelo rubio oscuro y ojos azules. Soy inteligente, DIVERTIDA y trabajadora. Me gusta leer, bailar y cantar. Mi color favorito es el morado.
Well done. Don´t use cómica as it sounds as if you would be a clown. Say divertida.
2007-02-09 15:10:39 · answer #2 · answered by Martha P 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Sound's OK just "Blonda" doesn't exist it is rubia or güera more correct, as for the rest I would too omit the YO and just start Me llamo Sarah
2007-02-08 21:48:58 · answer #3 · answered by Rsantos77 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Pelo rubio (o denotes male noun) erase blonda obscura there's no such thing, if you are refering to skin color you can say morena o blanca, the rest of the paragraph is fine. The word blonda does exist, it refers to a fabric.
2007-02-08 21:51:29 · answer #4 · answered by Georgewasmyfavorite 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
everything is fine, just take out the 1st "yo"
2007-02-08 21:43:05 · answer #5 · answered by beatswheats 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋