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it's a sad poem i guess and i wrote it after this guy dumped me and i felt really depressed.but i'm over it now and i jsut want to see what people think?
here it is..........................
FADING MEMORIES by me
memories that fade away
like the sunset
into the horizen....
fading memories
dying memories
sad memories
when they used to be glad
lonely memories
lonseme memories
romantic memories
cherished ....
thoughtful notes
sweet long letters
soulclose conversations
and unfufilled dreams
perfect compliments
perfect love
or as if it meant or seemed that way
but it's all unreal
because memories fade
like dust in the wind
like sand on a grave
and all turns dark
unhappy and lifeless
when all u have is memories
to hold onto
but that slip away

2007-02-07 11:29:50 · 9 answers · asked by greenismylife.songismyworld 2 in Family & Relationships Singles & Dating

9 answers

It kind of reminds me of the songs on the radio, and the relationships I've had. It's nice.

2007-02-07 11:36:42 · answer #1 · answered by Mikail 2 · 0 0

definite...i like appreciating poems! Bourne writes tremendous poems and Megha is tremendous at appreciating them..!! lol that's what you meant,i comprehend!..Hee Hee! :D @ Bourne: that's unlike that,pal.i respect your poems it quite is why i'm holding that.i do not comprehend why you're taking this in a incorrect context.that's not in basic terms me who likes your poems yet quite everyone likes them.there is not any approach in touch...i do not take care of staggering solutions btw.... Edit: No that is quite o.k.,Bourne :) you want not be sorry for this...i became in basic terms wondering what made you imagine so? yet now i'm comfortable that you've been in basic terms teasing....that is nice.i became not indignant anyhow...! :) ~Smile :)

2016-11-26 00:58:43 · answer #2 · answered by chapdelaine 4 · 0 0

Hey, i love poetry myself, i think its a great poem! It also has alot of truth.

2007-02-07 11:35:12 · answer #3 · answered by rEaDy4cHaNgE 4 · 0 0

that is so sweet, even though I am a boy. well I also make SONGS, there just
like that one, only with happy memories

2007-02-07 11:36:58 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Thats very goof, post it somewhere

2007-02-07 11:36:58 · answer #5 · answered by caring black guy 4 · 0 0

sad

2007-02-07 11:39:05 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

It's very good. I like it, post it on your myspace if you have one.

2007-02-07 11:32:55 · answer #7 · answered by Wendy C 4 · 0 0

It's really, really, really great!!!! I love it soooooo much!!!!

2007-02-07 11:35:24 · answer #8 · answered by Tighty 2 · 0 0

its very sad. :(

2007-02-07 11:35:08 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

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