Ive written this months ago....
and pls rate it..and be honest.
If I could picture when you start to cry
I would love to kiss each tear that falls..
if a tear falls down your cheek
I would kiss it.
If a tear falls down your lips..
I would kiss it.
But...if you dont cry,and cry from the inside
than I shall kiss your heart for every tear that falls....
2007-02-06 22:52:20 · 11 answers · asked by Gõlden angel 4 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
You did a great job, send it to the International Library of Poetry!
2007-02-06 22:56:09 · answer #1 · answered by roseannetb@verizon.net 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Its nice I like the story that it tells
However some of the wording could use a little work. A poets best friend is a Thesaurus or a dictionary, keep it up though it shows feeling and that's something
we need more of these days.
2007-02-07 07:10:04 · answer #2 · answered by Lucius Domitius 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think its a good poem. I like to write poetry too.
2007-02-07 07:01:06 · answer #3 · answered by nucha_123 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Okiley dokiley dock.
2007-02-07 07:13:23 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i thought it wuz koo, and i write myself and i dont reali say that soo...i think it got some real depth to it, for it to be short
(do you have an account at www.allpoetry.com ?)
5 stars
2007-02-07 07:01:40 · answer #5 · answered by dall4wwf 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good poem
2007-02-07 06:55:57 · answer #6 · answered by willy-wonka 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
can't give it here coz there are many enemies out here, if u know what I mean. You gotta have to email me.
2007-02-07 10:41:24 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
a lot better than anything i could write, i thought it was good
2007-02-07 07:10:19 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
cute
2007-02-07 06:55:48 · answer #9 · answered by gone 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
poor but so emotional, i give you C+
2007-02-07 07:00:32 · answer #10 · answered by steve 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋