you lied to me more than once
you said that you cared
but that was a lie too.
i found out that all i was
to you was an object and
thats not me.
Yes i am a girl but im not
an object that can be bought
or bet on.
so dont tell me things that
you know i want to hear and
that you know i want i will believe
all i ask for you to do is to tell
me the truth and be honest
with me on how yhou feel and
tell me whats wrong when
somethings bothering you.
im sick of you telling other people
how you feel about me but you cant
seem totell me to my face or write
me a note...nothing
You cant be man enough totell me anything.
thats not right. you lied to me again telling
me that you loved me and you still do.
i know the truth... youve told that
to many girls before me and i was
dumb enough to believe you
im sick of you lieing all the time
si guess what?? heres a lie for you...
im over you...you believed it,
now whos the dumb one?
2007-02-06 06:12:05 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
To be honest... not much of a poem. You have some great feelings and thoughts portrayed here, they just need to be organized a little better.
Chances are your a great gal who will continue seeing jerks like this and continue jotting down these types poetic feelings without really examining what you are writting. Your trying to tell yourself something. Listen to it!
2007-02-06 06:20:06 · answer #1 · answered by The Don 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Catharsis
2007-02-06 06:46:15 · answer #2 · answered by Elisa 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
WOW...That seems like a very emotionally driven poem. I like it but the end does not really fit with the flow.
2007-02-06 06:16:26 · answer #3 · answered by 1.2..3...Boo 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would call it "Regurgitated" because that's what it is. Basically you regurgitated your emotions and didn't even make it sounds well. This isn't a poem, and you need to think through what you will right instead of grabbing a piece of paper and just begin vomiting your emotions onto it. that's lame, and this sucks.
2007-02-06 06:16:47 · answer #4 · answered by melloncollieromance 3 · 0⤊ 2⤋
that poem is so true. boys lie. i have no idea what you should call it but i do think you defiantly got something there and way to go for not letting him get to you.
2007-02-06 06:18:25 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You should call it Failed Attempt Number One
2007-02-06 06:16:25 · answer #6 · answered by noddy 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Men Will Be Men
2007-02-06 06:22:25 · answer #7 · answered by rhonda_seiler 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"Tell Me"
It's very good and heart felt. Like the twist at the end.
2007-02-06 06:16:28 · answer #8 · answered by Christian93 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow i love it so much, you should call it So Sick
2007-02-06 06:16:19 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
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2016-12-03 19:34:12 · answer #10 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋