EVERY DAY IS JUST THE SAME
ANOTHER DAY FILLED WITH PAIN
ANOTHER MONTH OF TRUTH AND TEARS
BEGGING GOD TO TAKE ME AWAY
AWAY FROM THIS LONELINESS AND CONSTANT FEELING
NOT BUTTERFLIES AND HONEY
ONLY PAIN AND DEVOTION
THE SAD STORY OF AN IMPOSSIBLE LOVE
REMENINCE ON THE HAPPY DAYS
STUCK ON THE PAST BELIVES IN NO FUTURE
TIRED OF TRYING USED TO REJECTION
SORROW AND TEARS ARE NOW LIKE BREATHING
HER MIND AND HEART BEING ABUSED
SHE DIDNT WANT TO TRUST HIM
FEARING PAIN SHE TRIED TO GET AWAY
HIS SHARM AND GOOD LOOKS CAPTIVATED HER
HIS WILL HIS WORDS MADE HER STICK AROUND
TRUST WAS AN ISSUE IN THE BEGINING
SHE GUARDED HER HEART LIKE A FINE JEWEL
BUT HIM BEING A GOOD THIVE STOLE THE PRECIOUS HEART
THE LOVE WAS DREAMY
TOO GOOD TO BE TRUE
SHE TRUSTED HIS FEELINGS
SO DECIDED TO BE LOVED
SHE FELL FOR HIM DEEPLY
NOT A THING SHE WOULDNT DO
THE MAN TURNED AROUND WITH A GRIN ON HIS FACE
& SAID I LOVE YOU
SHE FELL FOR HIM DAILY DEVOTED HER LIFE
2007-02-06 05:55:19 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
4 A MAN THAT KNEW SHE WOULD ALWAYS BE BY HIS SIDE
BEING SO SURE THAT SHE WOULD STAY
THE MAN STARTED BEATING HER WITH EMOTIONAL PAIN
SHE RECALLS FEELING LIKE NOTHING
HE ALWAYS SAID I LOVE YOU
A SMILE CAME TO HER FACE
HIS ACTIONS MADE HIM DOUBT HER LOVE
OVER PROTECTIVE MAN PUT HIS HANDS ON THIS GIRL
AGGRESIVELY GRABBING HER
AND SAYING YOUR HERE TO STAY
WITH HATE FEAR AND LOVE SHE LOOKED AT THE MANS BLANK STARE
THEN DOWN TO HIS LIPS AS HE SAID
I LOVE YOU BABY BUT U GET ME MAD
SHE SMILED AT HIS WORDS LAUGHING INSIDE
HOW CAN THIS MAN LOVE ME
WHEN HE HAS DESTROYED ME INSIDE AND OUT
"I LOVE YOU" HER CONFORT
UNTILL HER SUDDEN DEATH
FIRST HER MIND, THEN HER HEART, THEN THE SOUL, AND FINALLY HER BODY LAYED ON THE FLOOR
ALL HER DEVOTION LOVE AND PRAISE
WAS PAYED BACK
BY A SLOW & PAINFULL DEATH HE GAVE HER
2007-02-06 05:55:55 · update #1
when a writing doesnt have a rhyme, it doesnt usually sound like a poem. it is short story i think..
2007-02-06 06:09:34 · answer #1 · answered by ErAs 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Okay thats deep, you must be feeling very guilty right at this point. Sounds like your describing a woman who loved you more than anything and you just tore her down. Why did you do that? Whats the point? I dont get this, did this really happen to u? My God, if someone loved me like this I would be right by them always. Who doesn't want a love like this? I dont get men or women sometimes
2007-02-06 14:10:33 · answer #2 · answered by Ashy B 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
THIS reads more like a short story. BUT the writer is in pain. SEEMS to me they need help.
2007-02-06 14:00:59 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's alright, but it's very 21st century, pre-madonna self centered kinda poem though.
2007-02-06 13:58:20 · answer #4 · answered by PJ T 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sound like you are reciting my life man
2007-02-06 13:59:57 · answer #5 · answered by Bertie D 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
*sniffles* that touched sumthin deep
2007-02-06 14:56:02 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋