My nights encounter poem, please rate 1 - 10 1 being the worst?

Question

As the howling wind did blow
I get eerie feelings from below
I can hear the crickets beeping
I feel behind me, people creeping

I was alone out here tonight
Now my feelings, full of fright
Are these people I am feeling
Alive or am I dreaming

I turned round, and started staring
All I see is moonlight glaring
As I turn more to the right
Slowly staring into the night

Then my body slowly quivers
Breaking out in all shivers
I get bad feelings from my past
Surely hoping they do not last

Do I run or stand my ground
Till these creatures come around
My heat pumps greatly from inside
I get this feeling I should hide

These strange sounds that I am hearing
Closely by, and near a clearing
There is a howl and then a pause
Like somehow it had a cause

So I give out an evil blast
For ten seconds, it did last
It was like a curling yell
Whose ever out there, go to hell

I cant believe what I am seeing
A young couple surely fleeing
They we scared more, more then m

Answer 1

ewwwwwww , what a wonderful poem , i love it
i give u 10 from 10
really wonderful

Answer 2

5

Answer 3

Good story line. It does need improvement, Find a more accurate word to describe crickets other than beeping as crickets do not beep, and its obvious that you used the word because it rhymes. Second stanza feeling and dreaming do not rhyme, so fix that. Try to use more descriptive adjectives, riding the poem of "everyday words". Then in the last Stanza on the last line you have a typo, I think meant to say me, and do not more twice, try much more, and add a fourth line to keep an even flow and measure of the poem, and watch that your meter is staying in good shape. That's about it, I know I'm very critical, forgive me for that. I do want you to know that I enjoyed it, I just think it needs just a bit of work. I would say over all I give it a 6

Answer 4

10 but more like a 20

Answer 5

OK i have a few problems with this one the last line needs revising for it's syllables are longer than the rest of the verse therefore making it harder to flow in the readers mind, as with the second line of the fourth verse for the same reasons. But other than that its a great poem in my opinion telling of the demons from your past that follows you constantly weighing on your mind to the point of paranoia only to realise that the past is the past and cant be lived again therefore your fears are the only thing your scared of and in the same right your fears of the past are scaring those in the present away from you. I give it an 8 well done!

Answer 6

I give you 5 out of ten the rhyming was good

Answer 7

great. Just work out to the last paragraph. overall 10/10.

Answer 8

10 , lovely

Answer 9

Very good.. 8/10.

Answer 10

10 +

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