Which one do you like best:
....by checking their compliance with the quality standards that we need/we have specified
Or
... by evaluating the conformity to the quality we require.
It is found in this sentence (the blank):
I have conducted an evaluation for the furniture tender by using two approaches, which are:
- Technical evaluation, .................................
It is for this sentence
2007-02-05 20:03:51 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
The first is better, but it's still not clear enough. There doesn't seem to be any plural noun for "they" to refer to (unless this is clear from previous sentences), and you seem to be equating "evaluation" with "by checking" with is grammatically awkward. The quickest fix there would just be to eliminate "by".
2007-02-05 21:02:52 · answer #1 · answered by Goddess of Grammar 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The first one is more clear. The second one leaves an ambiguity as to the conformity of what object/item you're talking about.
2007-02-06 04:10:46 · answer #2 · answered by Pookie 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I believe the first variation is most effective.
2007-02-06 04:33:42 · answer #3 · answered by ? 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋