How does this message sound for a girl?

Question

This girl and I had a little, you may called it confrontation. She seems not to trust me with her problems, even though I trust her with mine. I really want her to talk to me about them, she says she doesnt trust anyone with her problems. I think sometimes opening to people and letting them know what's going on, can make for the problems to not drown you so much in dispair. I can't sleep with the thought of making her sad or angry, so I decided to message her while she was offline. This does sound good?

Dathletez13 (1:45:25 AM): I know you are ofline, it's late and I am not feeling good about how we ended our last conversation. What do you mean by saying that no one trusts you to understand? I do trust you to understand, if I didn't I wouldn't have told you my problems in the first place. You are a smart girl and I do not want to see you upset by something I say or do, because that would just break me, maybe a "sorry" won't cut it now, even though I am, for whatever I did wrong.

(continued) I just hope you feel better by the time you read this, remember you CAN TRUST ME with your problems, I may seen repetitive but like you once told me I AM HERE FOR YOU. Also, I hope we can talk later on today, when we are both a little distant from our problems.

Answer 1

mmm... you can't force a person to trust you. Trust need to be earn / gain...

Answer 2

If you want an honest opinion, it doesn't sound good. "Whatever I did wrong." "Sorry" and you don't know why? You sound like a doormat. You can't find a better friend than her, she doesn't sound like a nice person but a manipulative b*tch.

Answer 3

That's fine. Now backoff. You don't want to come across as someone who's too needy. chicks don't dig that.

And I should know, cuz I'm a chick.