i don't know. depends on what kinda girl cora is...... that is a pretty name... its a nice thought but you don't want to freak her out. You know the 2 much 2 soon. even if you've known her 4 some time does she share in your feelings of empathy? If you haven't mentioned any of this to her b4 I'd start a little simpler... a little smaller. Good Luck.
2007-02-05 14:31:42
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answered by rainsparrow 4
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Hmm.. I think it's a bit too much.
The last bit:
"but can't you see that i can't live with out you and my life is going down because you are not with me."
It just sounds too needy - a bit like emotional blackmail.
I really don't want to be mean but if this girl is anything like me she'll not like how you make her responsible for your feelings. I know that you probably don't mean it literally ... but still.
Why not use the more common approach and just ask her out? :)
2007-02-05 22:25:46
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answered by Anonymous
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Sorry that's bad. Things to get rid of, I can't live without you( scary and desperate), you can't stop me from loving you( controlling and scary), without you I'm incomplete( sad and worthless), I promise to protect you( what does she need protection from). And cut the dream out for now. Try telling her why you like her. Don't tell her you love her, you can't possibly know her enough. Ask for a date. Be simple Casanova, don't pour your heart out so quick, she will run screaming.
2007-02-05 22:30:02
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answered by Kat 2
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does not sound like you are playing with a full deck.
this sounds too weird. if this girl is normal she will not take kindly to this as it sounds so pathetic. saying that this sounds like you are in a fantasy world. what would you do if some girl you did not have any feelilngs for sent you a letter like this? at best you would just feel sorry for this clingy needy guy.
Girls like a guy who have something on the ball and shows a lot of respect for themselves. You sound like Woody Allen in one of his movies..be more aloof..like Gary Cooper or Cary Grant...not Pee Wee Herman
2007-02-05 22:22:28
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answered by Anonymous
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I think this is really sweet and cute. Give it to her!! Tell her how you feel! You will never know unless you try! I dont know how she could refuse this!! But one thing bothers me... Your question says "for the girl I LIKE" It seems like you LOVE her, and if you do, tell her, but if its just like, dont say I LOVE YOU because thats what hurts the most, when you say I LOVE YOU and dont mean it! I give you two thumbs way up!!
2007-02-05 22:22:26
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answered by ♥ ☮ ☺ ♫ 4
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it could be ok but first does this girl have the idea that u like her if not u may want to try a little less first just try to talk to her, u don't want her to think u r obbsessed. that could scare her away so go easy and good luck
2007-02-05 22:23:31
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answered by Jodi Wolfe 1
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if you're serious about this letter, capitalize/use good punctuation at least.
i don't know you/Cora so i can't really say if you should send it or not
but if you choose to send it, make it seem like you put effort into it, not just typed it out in 30 seconds...
2007-02-05 22:19:45
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answered by chocolate 1
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i would love to see the reaction on the girls face when she reads that.........that is a little much considering she does not know that you like her (i am guessing)try to cut down on the babys and love stuff
2007-02-05 22:20:21
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answered by summerfun11421 2
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omg.
first of all, if i got this letter i would like cry. it is so adorable. i wish a guy could love me that much and have the guts to tell me.
i think its a way romantic gesture and i think you are awesome to put youself out there.
good luck-i hope you get the girl!
2007-02-05 22:19:44
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answered by tara 2
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i think its sweet but it depends on how close you really are with her and if she's moved on or not. its nice that you are so open but it might be coming on a lil strong though... maybe you should just talk to her first...
best of luck!
2007-02-05 22:25:17
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answered by runningballerina 4
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