i am applying for Watford Grammar sixth form there is place in which i have to say : why am i applying 4 a place in the sixth form at Watford Grammar School for boys, and then i have to outline my acheivements in academic works, sport and music my writing is not so good so can u give me a writing pattern for this question i mean a proper one i would be grateful
2007-02-05 05:44:35 · 3 answers · asked by j.j 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Other - Education
You'll want to repeat the question in the first line of your answer (If there is enough space.) I am writing from the US and there are subtle differences in the US vs. UK language...but, I'd try something like this format:
>I am well-suited for Watford Grammar School because....
(don't forget to tell them what you have to offer the school and the people there. Don't just say what you want to benefit from attending the school. Does that make sense. You want to be a person who will contribute to the place.....a "good citizen," as we say in the States.)
>Several attributes and achievements make me a good candidate for Watford Grammar School. I have.....(insert your greatness here. be honest, but don't be afraid to make the truth sound better than it might actually be.)
>In addition, I have....
>Other achievements include....
>In summary, I believe I could make a valuable contribution to the school and my fellow students because....
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So....you'll want to use the good old "Introduction, Body and Conclusion" format:
1. summarize their question
2. state your reasons
3. make sure your sentences and paragraphs have smooth "transitions"
4. summarize the whole thing at the end
Don't use my words verbatim. Put your own "spin" on them.
Bon Chance!
2007-02-05 06:07:19 · answer #1 · answered by www.40daysinparis.blogspot.com 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Since your name is JJ ( I have a son JJ) I will answer even though you have had a great one from another person.
In the end, before you turn in the paper, have a person who is a native speaker of English correct the glaring errors.
2007-02-05 14:19:43 · answer #2 · answered by thisbrit 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If the above question is authored by you without help, then I feel you do not need somebody's help for answering that question. Good luck.
2007-02-05 13:49:44 · answer #3 · answered by novice 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋