Tell me what you think, I tried to put forward my beliefs into a hymn. be honest
“I hail, O God
you come forth to give us day.
O my Lord,
you dwell above the horizon of the land
and your heart bathes Earth and Heathen.
You enter the temples and hearts of your people,
and they are glad.
O Great God, who comes forth,
who gives us light and life.
I phrase you, O God.
May you enter into my heart.
Grant that I may a temple to you in my Spirit,
and that is may be your dwelling, O God.
Furnish my temple with joy, O God.
Let your light enter me,
filling me with your love and warmth,
your energy and your power.
I devote myself to God.”
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2007-02-04 22:47:20 · 6 answers · asked by don't ask me while I'm t 4 in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
AMEN- excellent. You need to put it to music, or have someone do that for you. We should be the dwelling the place of the Lord, every day or our lives, letting His light shine through us. God bless- you blessed my morning with this hymn-
2007-02-05 02:37:52 · answer #1 · answered by AdoreHim 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very nice, except "phrase" which I think you mean as praise.
2007-02-05 06:52:07 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
oh no, i hate hymns
2007-02-05 06:51:21 · answer #3 · answered by jaz 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very good
2007-02-05 06:52:35 · answer #4 · answered by booge 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
HAIL SATAN!!!!!!!!!!!!
HEHEHEHE!
I'm Kidding!
I guess it's ok.
2007-02-05 06:56:36 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
AMEN!
2007-02-05 06:53:00 · answer #6 · answered by ♥ jolie ♥ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋