girls like you are hard to find but bare in mind ur one in a million so roses are red and vilotes are blue and i love u if i could make it any better tell me what to change
2007-02-04 08:41:37 · 19 answers · asked by ak222002 4 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
she is a mate but i like her
2007-02-04 08:49:50 · update #1
Rubbish..it doesnt rhyme and its so cheesy..dont send it.
2007-02-08 00:17:45 · answer #1 · answered by fajita 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Okay, let me first start by telling you it's not "valentiMes", it's ValentiNe's day. 2nd if you cannot even get any of your spelling correct in your little poem, then don't bother giving it to someone special....she'll just think your stupid and she'd have every right too. You really need to work on your gramatical issue before you even consider giving a girl a poem written by you. Spell check can only do so much, it doesn't fix broken English.
2007-02-04 08:46:22 · answer #2 · answered by gnuck gnuck 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
If I were your girl and you said that to me. I'll be like that's so sweet, and in the back of my mind I'll be like he so lame. Think of something else to do. Buy a card and write in the card telling her how much you love her. Because the poem is wack!!!!
2007-02-04 08:50:55 · answer #3 · answered by Proud Mommy 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dude, that's so cliché.
Don't tell her that. She'd probably think you had that rehearsed or something. Just tell her how you feel and sweep her off her feet with some glorious, romantic gesture.
Good luck! <3
2007-02-04 08:46:39 · answer #4 · answered by BOO! 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that's a good 1 i will have to put it in my wife's card this year
cheers mate for the good valentines day poem
2007-02-07 16:13:12 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
change the lot,if you wanna use poetry go to the libary or on-line and find something decent than adapt it to how you would say it,or this works well
miss you,need you,love you,want you,
2007-02-08 01:28:08 · answer #6 · answered by stephen a 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
man...by such english all girls
will run away from u....LOL
Try it this way.......
U r the one in a million for me,
Girls like you are hard to find ;
I said it heartly..... 'cause I love u so,
Always dearest please keep that in mind.
-----------⥠Be my Valantine...till the end of Time.
Now good luck for the coming day.
2007-02-04 09:10:57 · answer #7 · answered by naafraat 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Don't carry it to far...Just say girls like you are hard to find, you are one in a million...HAPPY VALENTINES DAY. Then sign it however you feel about her.
2007-02-04 08:48:55 · answer #8 · answered by beebee 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Roses are red, violets are blue, you've stolen my heart, I'll always love you!
2007-02-04 08:44:32 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Smile, put your arms around her and kiss her. Be direct. Poems don't work.
2007-02-04 08:54:44 · answer #10 · answered by kiscool34 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋