--For v-day 4 my bf of 3 1/2 months.......he is 14...
1) Roses are red, voilets are blue, these everyday things don't compare to you!
2) Roses are red, violets are blue, nothing is better than being with you!
3) Roses are red, voilets are blue, smiles are great, and so are you!
I personally like 2 better, but I don't know.....
What your oppinion?
2007-02-03 06:07:05 · 13 answers · asked by ♥Charming's Princess♥ 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Look these are not even considered a poem in my standards to attract a fly. Look these are as old as the hills. Come up with something that is creative and says something about how you really think. These are just rymes, not poems.
2007-02-03 06:16:36 · answer #1 · answered by Rooster 1972 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
For me a poem has to have rhythm. It would not unavoidably ought to rhyme regardless of the indisputable fact that it needs to hit my thoughts. i imagine readability of expression is major besides. i do not decide on to 2d wager what i'm studying about. I continuously search for what I time period "poetic gemstones"contained in the textual content.
2016-12-03 09:57:31 · answer #2 · answered by endicott 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like number two.
Jen
Or roses are red violets are blue squirrels love peauts but i love you!!
2007-02-03 06:16:18 · answer #3 · answered by **[[Jen]]** 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
first of all those are totally hot and sweet
but my fav is number 2
Roses are red, violets are blue, nothing is better than being with you!
2007-02-03 06:11:50 · answer #4 · answered by urluvmakesmeweak 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like number 1, but number 2 is my fave.
2007-02-03 09:26:51 · answer #5 · answered by someone 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Poem 2 is cute.But if you want something more creative maybe this can help you alot:http://www.freewebs.com/aloveletter/index.html
2007-02-03 06:23:02 · answer #6 · answered by gil 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Why not the whole three, i like them all...happy V day
2007-02-03 06:13:42 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
let it come from you. don't make it come from us. do what you like.
btw i like #1 or 2, prob 2 as well...
2007-02-03 06:13:41 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like # 2 it would relly show him that you are happy being with him
2007-02-03 06:23:34 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
None of them they seem so childish.I suggest you this;
Don't walk in front of me
I may not follow
Don't walk behind me
I may not lead
Just walk beside me
And be my friend...!!!!!!!!!
2007-02-03 06:25:09 · answer #10 · answered by bellamora 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋